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Published: 2016-09-05 04:27:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 908; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Description my entry for Warrior-Cats-Fanart ! It's Crookedstar, being crooked ahhaha see what I did thereand killing cats with Mapleshade using him as a puppet : D

I really like how this turned out C:
I used my friendΒ rabid-ruby 's character designsΒ 
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Comments: 12

Jerbutt [2016-09-05 04:37:43 +0000 UTC]

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Surprise, its me. Any who, this drawing. Its actually really well done, one thing that could've been better is the lighting. Its a bit dark and could be lighter.
Crookedstar's expression also looks a bit off, he looks a bit surprised instead of 'crooked and killing things'. Mapleshade could also look a tiny bit meaner. Aside from those small problems this is a nice drawing. Original and a great pose for both of them. I especially like who you made Mapleshade slightly transparent. It matches her description from the books.
Also I really like Crookedstar's design, its really cool beans.

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S-e-r-p-e-n-t In reply to Jerbutt [2016-09-05 04:44:11 +0000 UTC]

ayyy thanks for the critique, I agree xD

i have a black background for photoshop so it makes everything seem lighter than it is lol

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rabid-ruby [2016-09-05 21:30:03 +0000 UTC]

ahh this is really nice!! and you make my designs so pretty???

one thing i'd reccomend it so make the shading a little less blended if that makes sence

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S-e-r-p-e-n-t In reply to rabid-ruby [2016-09-05 22:08:34 +0000 UTC]

ah ok thanks!!! We should.l collab more tho

Also ye it was supposed to be painted but i failed

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rabid-ruby In reply to S-e-r-p-e-n-t [2016-09-05 22:13:37 +0000 UTC]

yes we should do a collab!

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S-e-r-p-e-n-t In reply to rabid-ruby [2016-09-05 23:59:42 +0000 UTC]

yeee idk what though

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DominicTheRaccoon [2016-09-05 04:28:20 +0000 UTC]

That's epic, in a creepy way.

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S-e-r-p-e-n-t In reply to DominicTheRaccoon [2016-09-05 04:28:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks!! C:

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DominicTheRaccoon In reply to S-e-r-p-e-n-t [2016-09-05 04:33:24 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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S-e-r-p-e-n-t In reply to DominicTheRaccoon [2016-09-05 04:34:59 +0000 UTC]

I feel like I made the colors way too dark again though haha

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DominicTheRaccoon In reply to S-e-r-p-e-n-t [2016-09-05 04:45:05 +0000 UTC]

It being dark makes it ominous by default.

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S-e-r-p-e-n-t In reply to DominicTheRaccoon [2016-09-05 04:45:24 +0000 UTC]

mmm true

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