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SankofaRida — Building Tension
Published: 2008-12-08 01:40:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 5695; Favourites: 61; Downloads: 175
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Murdoc: Poppet! I can't stand it much longer!Ursula: Mudsie, Calm down. It's only been a year.
Murdoc: A year for you, 3 years for me! And I'm losing my mind!
Ursula: You haven't had sex in 3 years?!
Murdoc: The moment I saw you, no other woman who crossed my path could arouse the passion I started to feel.
Ursula: (blushes) pp..passion?!
Murdoc: I may have had many lovers in the past, poppet. But you are the first woman I can say the words " I love you" and mean it. You're a goddess in my eyes.
Murdoc wraps his arms around Ursula's waist, pulling her closer to him.
Ursula's heart was racing and her body was getting warmer by the minute.
Murdoc: Please...what do I have to for you to trust me!
Ursula just looked at him, she did trust,love and want him, but something was holding her back.
But WHAT?
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Comments: 36
OMG It my favorite character from the most awesome band ever. Finish the story please. I have to know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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give him something ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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aaahhh c'mon this is killing me! and muds! ahhhhhh
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love love love your work esp. this you, as ive said before, have skill
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Hmm...i have an idea. Maybe she can't go on because during her previous relationship she had been hurt. Sure she loves and trust Murdoc but she just can't get let go of her past just yet. Perhaps in order to go further, maybe she has to confront her past first.
fav.
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Could it be the fact that he has sharp teeths? O_o lol
OK! now that I got that out of the way. I can now say that I love the shading in this one. Especially on her hair ^^
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OH MY GOD!!!!
I don't know who I'm more jealous of!!! >///<;
This is- oh my, i'm ashamed to say it- HOT!
I hope I can do justice to it.
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Oh my God. Murdoc is really fallen in love for Ursula. o.O
What avoid Ursula after all? 
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maybe...or an ex she still hasn't gotten over or maybe something worse!
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Ohh man second thoughts???
I hope what she choose is right! >.< I want to know! >.<
wow no Sex for 3 years..must be painful for Muds..O.O;
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Maybe something or someone from Ursula's past is keeping her from taking the relationship to the next level.
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Wow I wonder who or what? but still can she really trust Muds still ?? O.O
Ohhhh >.<
But still Great job ^.^
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More then when she first met him!
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>.< Ohhh man...makes me so jumpy..for some reason!
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Ah now that would explain a lot.
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more like giving in! But she may be ready to make Murdoc's suffering stop....maybe!
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I hope so! >.<
Great work TTWTT as always!
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Awww this is precious! Dont be scared Ursula! *hugs her* Murdocs a one of a kind man *winks*
Great job! This is very tense!
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Love the clothes!!
And I also want to know WHAT? I'd jump him in an instant (but that would defeat the whole purpose of Murdoc actually giving into passion and love, now wouldn't it?)
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Maybe something or someone from Ursula's past is keeping her from taking the relationship to the next level.
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Could be. That would be a very reasonable issue to hold someone back. Still, the relationship she has with Murdoc now is very sweet.
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yeah WHAT? i wanna know!
lol, this is cute, even without color it looks great!
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Maybe something or someone from Ursula's past is keeping her from taking the relationship to the next level.
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Ahhh, I see. Do you know who the certain something or someone is?
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not sure yet! Still working out the character!
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ah okay 
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