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Sometimes when I dreamOf things I want to do
Some of these make me wonder
If evil could be true
If evil resides inside me
If corruption taints my soul
I hope that i would relise
I think that I would know
I hope that there is none
But my thoughts give me pause
Some things i wish to do
Tear my conscience with claws
I keep my desires inside
Never let them loose
But even as I do this
I have to look at truth
Some thoughts i have inside me
Are evil through and through
The question I have now is
What am I to do?
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Comments: 5
Moonlight1868 [2009-06-22 23:15:04 +0000 UTC]
It's not too weird. I like it, especially the end.
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sariadragon In reply to Moonlight1868 [2009-06-22 23:16:29 +0000 UTC]
i'm glad you do i dunno where it came from should i post some of my older poems too? like the ones in my elephant notebook?
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Moonlight1868 In reply to sariadragon [2009-06-22 23:18:58 +0000 UTC]
Sure, why not? I like your poetry Em. It's really good. And I'm sure I haven't seen those poems so I would love to see them now.
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sariadragon In reply to Moonlight1868 [2009-06-22 23:20:03 +0000 UTC]
yes you have they are all the ones i wrote in school and submitted alot to the devils den
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Moonlight1868 In reply to sariadragon [2009-06-22 23:22:38 +0000 UTC]
Well, if you have any Trimp the Rover or Dernhil it would be cool to read those. I've read some of the other ones.
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