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lOld Sketch! ^-^Related content
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I like to know if you did this in pen b/c if you did that's awesome. Everything about this drawing rocks!!
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Thank you for the comment^^.
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Nice.
I like the character design, the strong black form paired with the lithe body and crossed arms is a powerful image. The background is cool but rather busy, with the right color or tonality it could work very well, but left alone as line art it is quite distracting. The creatures themselves are gorgeous, but some of the filler scratchmarks are to scratchy to fit the rest of the piece, the white space (assuming there is white space, it is difficult to tell, especially in the top left corner, it may be filler or it may be a wing) itself would have looked wonderful, especially contrasting the open side figures with the black central figure. Of course all this is understandible given that it seems it is merely pen and ink, but still, added tonality and gradation would seperate the various elements very nicely.
Despite aforementioned critique it is a very nice piece and under closer scrutiny the flow of it, while at times interrupted is a wonderful composition. Well done
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Thank you for the comment and critiques( I really appreciate it). I realized about the background that is busy, and thank you for the advice. About the
white space( I realized it in the left top corner) looks like I forgot to fill it with something^-^
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Thank you for the commrnt^-^. I really appreciate it
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