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Published: 2005-07-22 08:20:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 167; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 6
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Heroin, alcohol, sex, or weed,I have an addiction that I have to feed.
I have to cut and watch it bleed
To get a release, to get what I need.
I need a drizzle of a hot, red, pain.
But it’s a sharp fix, so I can’t complain.
My scars are my soul’s windowpanes
Because my eyes no longer need the strain.
Head on collision walking down these tracks,
But it’s to late now, I can’t turn back.
Just like a junkie that’s addicted to crack,
Fall into euphoria, until out, black.
I’ve slashed the skin, and cut to deep,
But they say you “sew” what you reap.
It’s the only promise I can’t keep.
I’m not awake, but I’m not asleep.
It’s hard to understand this thing,
Because I have to feel the burn, the sting
And I guess I could bake or even clean,
To help me when it’s happening.
No such luck, to temptation I give in
And cut again, again, and again.
I’m told I broke the most vengeful sin,
But it’s no use stopping now, there’s never an end.
Comments: 10
adourned-somebody [2005-07-30 07:29:17 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry for not commenting earlier, been away... I like this, it really hits the mark
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scaryblob2002 In reply to adourned-somebody [2005-07-30 09:22:30 +0000 UTC]
thanks, it's no prob. I'm glad to hear from you though, welcome back
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scaryblob2002 In reply to ElectronicFox [2005-07-23 23:30:17 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much, very much appreciated
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mycruelreality [2005-07-22 18:33:52 +0000 UTC]
Awesome write. I agree with 'SysSadist' about the stanzas, but i t works the way it is too.
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scaryblob2002 In reply to mycruelreality [2005-07-22 20:24:43 +0000 UTC]
thank you much for your critique i will separate them and see what happens
i love your name!
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mycruelreality In reply to scaryblob2002 [2005-07-24 05:49:03 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, and thanks!
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SycSadist [2005-07-22 11:10:50 +0000 UTC]
i ove the way things are grouped into ryming greoups...but perhaps seperating it into stanzas would work in your favour...gr8 poem tho^^..i faved it
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scaryblob2002 In reply to SycSadist [2005-07-22 20:20:40 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much for your input! and thanks for the fav. as well :hugs: love the name too
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