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ScottyTaylor — Pose Practice 1

Published: 2010-09-12 15:06:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 997; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description One of my many upcoming pose practices. This is just a sketch but I would still like criticism and ways to improve for when I do this pose again.
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cekario [2010-09-12 18:05:00 +0000 UTC]

Hum, well let's see.
Overall, it's actually good. Dig the pose, very nice done.
The physiognomies and proportions look alright, except for her left leg maybe (looks exaggerated angulated). The shirt ... I think if we can see her boobs through it, even being a baggy clothing, you should draw it more skinny around here stomach and legs too. Or hide more the boobs.
The shades and folds are a bit confusing around her stomach.
Hair and face: excelent in my eyes.

Let's see how practice #2 turns out. Keep the good job, buddy

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ScottyTaylor In reply to cekario [2010-09-12 19:03:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot I'll take this into account when I draw this pose again

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