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Chapter Four
The Girl in the Photograph
The occupant of the next house on Billy’s street was a small, lean, blotchy-faced man in his sixties wearing a tatty, old jacket and a flat, cloth cap. He wasn’t very welcoming.
“Yes, what do you want?” he demanded to know.
Billy quickly introduced himself and handed him one of the leaflets. After reading it, the old man softened a little and invited Billy inside. His name was Mr Alistair Cribbins and he sometimes worked as a handyman in the neighbourhood, trimming hedgerows and repairing leaking pipes.
“I know how it feels to lose a pet,” he said. “My own pooch, Hendrix, went missing in 1967 and it was the saddest day of my life. I should have kept a closer eye on him, but I was performing in a rock band at the time. We were called the Dream Gatherers, by the way. Have you ever heard of us?”
Billy said he hadn’t and followed the man into a small, cramped sitting room that resembled a junk shop he had once visited in London. There was even a rusty, old bicycle wheel propped against the wall next to an electric guitar with missing strings. Half-empty whiskey bottles, unpaid bills and out-of-date betting slips were strewn haphazardly across the coffee table.
“We even performed at The Ship and Whale pub one evening,” Mr Cribbins was saying, sitting down on an armchair and reaching for a scrapbook on the table. “What a terrific night that was. Nearly every seat in the pub was taken, and a member of the audience even stayed for the encore.” He handed Billy the scrapbook. “If we’d had more practice, I’m sure we could have been bigger than the Beatles,” he said with a long and nostalgic sigh.
Billy sat down on another chair and quickly leafed through the scrapbook. It was full of very old snapshots of fresh-faced young men with mops of long, black hair. Some of them were wearing suits.
“Very interesting,” Billy said, trying to be polite. “But which one’s you?”
“I’m the one playing the electric guitar,” Mr Cribbins said, pointing at one of the pictures.
Billy didn’t know what to say. He couldn’t see a resemblance at all.
Then he remembered the missing children, and hurriedly closed the scrapbook.
“What can you tell me about the missing children, Mr Cribbins?” he asked. “What do you think is happening to them?”
For several moments, the old man did not speak, then sat back and fidgeted nervously on his chair.
“It’s happening again, isn’t it,” he eventually said, glancing at the window fearfully. “Cats, dogs and children are beginning to disappear.”
Billy nodded his head and told Mr Cribbins about Jeremy Sponge and Victoria Spike, the two children who had recently vanished.
‘Dreadful business,” the old man continued, slowly shaking his head. “There are rumours of an eerie, supernatural fog that rolls in from the sea, smothers the children and then swallows them up alive. ”
Feeling nervous, Billy looked around the room. A cold draft of air was beginning to make him shiver, and he had the strangest feeling he was being watched.
“However, I don’t believe such nonsense myself,” Mr Cribbins was saying. “People watch far too many horror films these days and their minds have been muddled by the violence.”
Billy froze. He was staring at a large, black and white photograph hanging above the fireplace. He recognised the style immediately. It was another picture by Diane Honeydew, the Cloudberry photographer, and it showed an old-fashioned ice cream parlour overlooking Cloudberry beach.
Slowly, Billy rose to his feet, padded across the room and stood in front of the picture.
Like the photograph on Mrs Rumblefish’s wall, it had been taken at night-time and foam-flecked waves were crashing violently against the cliff.
Then he gasped and put a hand up to cover his mouth.
In the photograph, a young girl had mysteriously shimmered into view. It was the same girl he’d seen in Mrs Rumblefish’s picture a few moments ago. Whether she’d been hiding behind the ice cream parlour or had appeared from out of shot, Billy couldn’t tell. Her hair was shining like silver in the moonlight and she was clutching a rag doll against her chest.
“Help us, Billy!” she said, waving her ghostly-white hand. “You must help us, please!”
To be continued...
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Comments: 41
scratchproductions In reply to Charlene-Art [2017-09-05 17:34:13 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. It's written very simply so that language learners in Japan can follow it. I wrote and illustrated another story for the same newspaper last year called 'The Haunted Snow Globe'. I think there's a gallery on here somewhere.
I'll be posting Chapter 7 of 'Caught On Camera' on Thursday.
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Charlene-Art In reply to scratchproductions [2017-09-12 21:02:03 +0000 UTC]
Oh that's really nice! I should read that as well at some point
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Doll-Ladi [2017-08-17 21:36:30 +0000 UTC]
Oh my goodness I would be so horrified if someone in a photo yelled out to me for help. I find it to be real creepy and scary too. I love the way you described the girl in this image clutching her rag doll. It has the makings of a great writer and good imagination. I can sense in my head the great atmosphere of it all. I wonder what billy's next move will be and I am sure this is going to be one of those surprise endings too like one of them Hitchcock suspense films that keep you on your toes. Waiting anxiously to see what Billy will do next! The drawing is awesome.
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scratchproductions In reply to Doll-Ladi [2017-08-18 12:29:56 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. Yes, I love Hitchcock films too. I admire how he used to build suspense.
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Doll-Ladi In reply to scratchproductions [2017-08-18 21:28:52 +0000 UTC]
OH me too am a big Hitchcock fan too
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scratchproductions In reply to Doll-Ladi [2017-08-20 16:03:49 +0000 UTC]
I love most of his films, and he made dozens and dozens of them.
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Doll-Ladi In reply to scratchproductions [2017-08-20 19:11:05 +0000 UTC]
Oh me too I watch his reruns every night of his episodes
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scratchproductions In reply to Doll-Ladi [2017-08-21 16:55:32 +0000 UTC]
'North by North West', 'The 39 Steps' and 'Spellbound' are three of my favourites by Hitchcock.
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Doll-Ladi In reply to scratchproductions [2017-08-21 18:18:32 +0000 UTC]
I have a few faves like "The Birds" And "Pyscho"
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scratchproductions In reply to Doll-Ladi [2017-08-22 13:34:29 +0000 UTC]
I love those two films. They're probably the scariest movies he ever made. I watched 'Psycho' when I was only about nine years old and it frightened me to death!
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Doll-Ladi In reply to scratchproductions [2017-08-22 21:35:44 +0000 UTC]
I would imagine so. I liked some of his hour episodes too Andy
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scratchproductions In reply to YaZakaria [2017-08-17 20:37:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much.
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JIMENOPOLIX [2017-08-17 17:29:56 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, the Bates' Motel is looking more pleasant now.
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scratchproductions In reply to JIMENOPOLIX [2017-08-17 20:34:55 +0000 UTC]
Ha ha. Yes, I very nearly called the illustration 'Wish You Were Here'.
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LuLupoo [2017-08-17 12:48:50 +0000 UTC]
I am little confused, I thought the next house was suppose to be the Diane Honeydew? Didnt Mrs. Rumblefish tell him that she lived down the street? Mr Alistair Cribbins didnt seem like he was going to very friendly at first. The strange thing about this is that he saw the same photograph with the girl in it asking Billy to help her again. I dont see how he can help the children in the photograph. I think that Diane Honeydew is behind this and she some how has made it possible to put the children in the photograph. But where are the animals then? Or did she intentionally put the photograph there so Billy can help get them out of there? I know I am asking questions that sound crazy but dont tell me lol. I know you wont tell anyway. In the photograph looks like the little girl is standing on the fence and that ice cream parlor I wonder why that is there? I love how
the drawing of the photograph, came out awesome. It appears that this has been going on a long time. This story sure has me guessing and the more characters a I read about they all sound suspicious. Not sure about Mr. Alistair.
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scratchproductions In reply to LuLupoo [2017-08-17 13:29:16 +0000 UTC]
Diane Honeydew lives in a house at the end of the street, not immediately next-door to Mrs Rumblefish. I'll make it clearer in the rewrite I'm working on.
You've got the right idea, though. I reckon Dane Honeydew is behind it all. But what has she been doing? And why?
Next chapter will be posted on Thursday, 24th August (next week).
Be afraid. Be very afraid.
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LuLupoo In reply to scratchproductions [2017-08-17 20:29:12 +0000 UTC]
Oh ok I thought when he left Mrs. Rumblefish house he was
going to see Diane Honeydew, for some reason I thought she
lived on the same block. Hmm I had a feeling she was involved
in this.
Being very afraid
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scratchproductions In reply to LuLupoo [2017-08-17 20:36:58 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I'm sure Diane Honeydew is involved. Mind you, she must be quite old by now.
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LuLupoo In reply to scratchproductions [2017-08-17 20:38:46 +0000 UTC]
You know I never thought of that, your right she has to be very
old, because they mention this happened if I remember correctly
around 1967 when kids and animals went missing. Maybe she
is dead
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scratchproductions In reply to LuLupoo [2017-08-18 12:27:26 +0000 UTC]
I probably should have worked out how old is she is (or was). If she was taking photographs in the 1960s, then she must be well into her 70s by now, maybe even older. Both Fiona Rumblefish and Alistair Cribbins are quite old too (in their 60s, at least).
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LuLupoo In reply to scratchproductions [2017-08-18 19:43:27 +0000 UTC]
I would never thought to ask about how old she is until
you mentioned it. I like all the characters and I am suprised
I can remember all of them so far Maybe even in their
70s too?
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scratchproductions In reply to LuLupoo [2017-08-19 16:55:38 +0000 UTC]
Mrs Rumblefish and Mr Cribbins are in their late 60s, I would imagine. But Diane Honeydew is slightly older, so she must be in her 70s. There's even a possibility she may be even older than that!
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LuLupoo In reply to scratchproductions [2017-08-19 20:32:16 +0000 UTC]
I am guessing but dont tell me, that Diane Honeydew is a witch!
Oh my goodness this story is making me laugh lol. I love these names that you
give the characters.
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scratchproductions In reply to LuLupoo [2017-08-20 16:02:49 +0000 UTC]
I'm not so sure she's a witch, but you're very close. Apart from saying that, I am keeping my lips sealed.
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LuLupoo In reply to scratchproductions [2017-08-20 19:22:55 +0000 UTC]
I think I am the one should keep my lips sealed
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scratchproductions In reply to LuLupoo [2017-08-21 16:57:00 +0000 UTC]
Ha ha. Love the zipped face. I wonder if that's what Diane Honeydew looks like?
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LuLupoo In reply to scratchproductions [2017-08-21 17:29:18 +0000 UTC]
Do you have a pic of Diane Honeydew
Or will that come later?
I am going to have this story finished before time
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scratchproductions In reply to LuLupoo [2017-08-22 13:32:32 +0000 UTC]
You will see a picture of Diane Honeydew when you reach Chapter Ten. But I think she's mentioned again in the next chapter.
Two more days to go!
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LuLupoo In reply to scratchproductions [2017-08-22 21:06:39 +0000 UTC]
Oh cool I cant wait to see what Diane Honeydew
looks like. I have a lot of chapters to go yet so have to be patient.
Look forward to the next chapter coming up on Thursday.
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scratchproductions In reply to LuLupoo [2017-08-24 07:56:00 +0000 UTC]
You don't have to wait. It's here!
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