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I really love this picture. It's great really. You did a great job!~<3
Lets start with the good things!
~You mixed and blurred the colors so well! It looks so realistic.
~ The fur looks real . Almost like you could pet it right here, right now.
~The features on the face are very detailed.
~The paw shapes on the back two are perfect.
~ The tail looks so dang fluffy~<3
Now onto the not as good things!~<3
~ The front paws are shaped kinda weird. But they aren't bad though!
~ Try to clean up stray lines when you get done! There is one near the chest, and on the back
Thats all for me!
This is an adorable picture!
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okay my first Critique so .. um ya ...( my punctuation might not be great either)
okay so when i looked at this drawing the expression that i got from it was kind of cheeky the way his/hers eyebrows were raised and hie/hers tongue was out The second thing that i noticed was the eyes
when you look at the eyes they have so much meaning in them it is like they are almost real i think that the way artists can do that is amazing
second the shape of the face is absolutely perfect I mean the nose is just perfect and the shading is amazing
now the chest- the chest looks like you can just reach out and pet it it has the right amount of shading (yes i know i am obsessed with shading) and the fur looks real
the legs-the legs are the perfect size for the body and i know that sound weird but i have seen art and sometimes the legs on an animal are just too short or too long but these are perfect and the hind legs are fabulous as well
the tail- i love the way curls behind the body and (yes more shading) the shading is great because you can definitely see where the tail curls
okay i think that is all from my first critique and i hope you enjoyed reading this whole thing cos i feel quite nervous about it cos it is my first one
a tip-- Keep drawing because i think you have a brilliant future ahead
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wow ur really good hey would you mind putting one of them on my website for drawinig?? If you don t wanna thats fine i just want some people to join it and put some artwork on it! If you wanna the website it connect2art.webs.com. Its my first website i have ever made and its not finished yet i still wana put a chat box on it and more. If your interested please go on it and if you like it tell you friends pleasse!! Thank you!!
- miceymajic
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