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seblev2790 — Epsilon

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Published: 2018-05-16 12:16:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 672; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 0
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Real Name: Ouro Manjura

Power: Able to manipulate energy and redistribute it / Flight

Ouro spent his after-earth years as part of the military police with the Human Federation. After initial success with the Carrionite program, Ouro was part of a wave of second recruits to be tested along with his long time friend Jacob (Later known as the hero “Centurion”). After proving himself successful in all field tests, Ouro was given the code name “Epsilon” and assigned his first planet to guard. Though the planets race was initially reluctant to accept him, Ouro eventually became well loved by the alien race and welcomed as their hero.

Though they protected different worlds, Jacob always visited Ouro and their friendship remained strong. However, over time Jacob became increasingly paranoid, convinced that the Federation was using the worlds they inhabited for their resources until they no longer had any use for them and found a way to destroy it, syphoning the Carrionite from the remains. In his last visit, Jacob was sure that his world would be next and planned to stop them, though Ouro still had his doubts. The next day, the Federation came to arrest Ouro as a co-conspirator with Jacob, who he found out was not only dead but also being charged with attempting to take down the Federation with Ouro. Bleeding and barely making it out alive, Ouro managed to escape with the help of a mysterious stranger named Yeitsu...

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Comments: 14

Cupercrusader [2018-06-27 23:52:37 +0000 UTC]

Nice design!

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seblev2790 In reply to Cupercrusader [2018-06-28 12:34:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I tried to do a very simple streamlined look

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Cupercrusader In reply to seblev2790 [2018-06-28 18:47:54 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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GreenTomberry [2018-05-16 18:53:15 +0000 UTC]

He look cool! Nice job on the design !

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seblev2790 In reply to GreenTomberry [2018-05-16 19:31:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I wanted to do a very simplistic design, sort of a challenge to myself since I tend to over-complicate designs when I have lots of ideas. 

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GreenTomberry In reply to seblev2790 [2018-05-16 20:00:21 +0000 UTC]

Knowing to synthetyze is a good thing. So is a simple but efficient design

I you give a character to much, it will ironically kill it. At some point at least. I have nothing against well decorated characters ( à la final fantasy ).

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seblev2790 In reply to GreenTomberry [2018-05-17 03:40:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh don't get me wrong, when its right and done well it can be super cool but there is something so cool in less is more

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GreenTomberry In reply to seblev2790 [2018-05-17 07:03:46 +0000 UTC]

Exactly! ;D

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seblev2790 In reply to GreenTomberry [2018-05-17 14:04:19 +0000 UTC]

Actually do you know Bruce Timms designs? Always wanted to do something like that

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GreenTomberry In reply to seblev2790 [2018-05-17 16:34:33 +0000 UTC]

Well, your characters look like they could come from comic books, so I would say you're good at it!

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seblev2790 In reply to GreenTomberry [2018-05-17 18:17:56 +0000 UTC]

thank you so so much you dont have any idea how much that means to me

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Flara24 [2018-05-16 13:09:12 +0000 UTC]

Eeeeee! I love the way he looks !!! This is your older stuff ?  Bravo !!! 

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seblev2790 In reply to Flara24 [2018-05-16 15:22:02 +0000 UTC]

Yup! I'm going to go back further and further so once I finish this story, I'll post my previous story before the Archeus one

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Flara24 In reply to seblev2790 [2018-05-16 18:39:05 +0000 UTC]

Can’t Wait!!! To see all!

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