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Published: 2006-02-22 00:28:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 121; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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its times like these that it seems,you dont give a damn about me or my life,
you are in your own world,
of spider-lilies and the setting sun...
Im all alone here on the stairs,
the first place where our kiss was shared together,
and I cant believe that youre gone...
You took my hand to look at me,
and "i love you" was spoken through your eyes,
my heart was yours,
and yours was mine.
I touched your lips and ive never felt so close...
youre a part of me and wont eve change...
Intoxicating images,
as the rythmn in your chest combines with mine,
it felt as if wed always be together,
but now that feelings gone...
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Comments: 5
second-sight In reply to emotion-emo4short [2006-12-17 18:19:54 +0000 UTC]
im sorry kid....no one should have to feel that...
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RedWombat [2006-06-05 23:48:07 +0000 UTC]
Its good. I love the fact that the last line is "but nowthat feeling's gone..." Its so, abrupt almost. Its very good.
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ThatGuyisMe [2006-03-02 03:45:04 +0000 UTC]
thats a pretty good poem ou got there new favorite nice job
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