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Published: 2006-02-22 00:33:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 96; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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this is the way i feel somtimes...like you just shot me in the heart...im thinking of making this into a shirt...colors :black, light bright blue-green, light grey
i wanna put some words on it...but dont know what to write...
help please? also on a name...im not sure i like this one to much
eventhough all of that crap...this is definatly my fav of recent artwork....
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Bakehebi [2006-02-28 03:40:47 +0000 UTC]
I've seen that you've been wanting your work to be critiqued. So I will try my best on this picture.
Anatomy, anatomy, anatomy. Study and draw real people to get a sense of proportions. On this picture the legs and arms are to short and the head is too large.
For the clother again you should practice from real life. Observe how cloth drapes and pulls on an object. Gravity should be taken into effect as well. The wrinkles on clothes in this picture seem like blood vessels that crawl up the legs and arms.
Now enough with the bad stuff and on to the good. His face is very expressive and shows the shock and the pain clearly. The angle of the picture also helps to give the picture more feeling and drama. The splatter that followed the bullet is really cool looking.
Good luck and I hope that you don't take this as an attack on your work rather as a helpful bunch of tips.
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second-sight In reply to Bakehebi [2006-02-28 05:21:14 +0000 UTC]
thx! and on the legs...i know you said the wrinkles in the clothes seem like blod vessles...thats kinda what i was shooting for....to show definition...but thx alot! ill practice on the drapes in my room...
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