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Published: 2012-04-24 19:46:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 878; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 24
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Hey again !!
In this time I try to do something better than the last one So It's Matte painting again
5h
| Resources :
sxc.hu And cgtextures.com
Hope you like it
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Here's my critique. You've got a pretty solid mood going on here, with pretty decent lighting. The perspective on the right is all wrong. Specifically, the texture on the right wall that's connected to the ramp should be in proper perspective. You've got it following the ramp, but it should be following perspective lines that are drawn from the horizon. Also, builders never make doors or windows that follow a slant like that; they are always made level.
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Thank you So much
It's helpful
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Exceptional job! Since you asked for critique, I think you should take a look at where your light source is and where the shadows are. For instance the shadow to the right of the building on the left doesn't make sense because it should be receiving direct light from the moon. And the shadows cast by the rail isn't in the correct direction. The shadow from the building on the right isn't long enough. Something that I thought was remarkable about this piece is the details you put into it. For instance the sign in the foreground is incredibly intricate, and I love that I can look into the distance (the center of the painting) and see the details of the shops there. I like that there is enough ambient light from the moon to see all the intricacies in the buildings. Great job!!!
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Thank you So much
It's helpful
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