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New creature for my upcoming book!!! Appreciate your opinion...I need some ideas for a name...
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MiraiParasol [2013-08-24 20:30:07 +0000 UTC]
Love the design! especially the cowl
now here comes the opinion part (mostly technical), I feel that the wings aren't proportional to her body mass, maybe make them a little bit longer?
I like what you did with the legs, design wise I think I need to see a picture of her standing to make anything.
The thighs are nice and thick and they morph into the legs of an insect. Really nice I haven't seen that done before The transition from this angle looks too drastic from thick to really thin, I would ease a little more slowly into the transition.
Hope this helps
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SelectYourself In reply to MiraiParasol [2013-08-24 21:23:39 +0000 UTC]
That helps a lot, thank you VERY MUCH!!!
Do you have any name or color suggestions?
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MiraiParasol In reply to SelectYourself [2013-08-24 21:28:19 +0000 UTC]
Yup I'm glad I could help, I know it can be difficult to receive feedback. I'm glad to help any time
as for color suggestion could you describe to me a little about the environment of where this character lives and maybe a little about where she's from just a few words to describe her personality?
that would help me help you choose colors fit for this character
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SelectYourself In reply to MiraiParasol [2013-08-25 01:55:17 +0000 UTC]
Her purpose is to nourish and protect nature and wildlife. She is very intelligent, kind, caring, and curious,
but also quick to anger when her home or environment is threatened...
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MiraiParasol In reply to SelectYourself [2013-08-26 00:38:54 +0000 UTC]
alright, since she protects nature I would say some greens and browns. Natural soft colors
but since she's guarding I would add in some sort of bright colors like a nice bright red or blue maybe a purple to say "hey don't mess with me!" those would go onto her appendages (maybe she's got some poison stocked up)
I imagine she has a well developed sense of sight so make those eyes pop with a purple or burnt orange
On her cowl I'm not sure if she's some sort of royalty but it would be cool to see a bronze or gold like she's wearing armor
well if you have any other questions feel free to ask
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SelectYourself In reply to MiraiParasol [2013-08-26 01:57:19 +0000 UTC]
You are AWESOME!!! Thank you very much for your perspective and advice!
Would you mind taking a look once her color is complete...?
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MiraiParasol In reply to SelectYourself [2013-08-26 15:11:22 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome ^_^ I'm glad that I could help
I would love to take a look just send me a comment or note and I'll be right over
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SelectYourself In reply to vampsaiyain [2013-08-24 21:21:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!!! I really appreciate it!
It means a lot!!!
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vampsaiyain In reply to SelectYourself [2013-08-24 21:22:27 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome all your work is really great!
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SelectYourself In reply to DreamWeaver51 [2013-08-24 21:20:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!!!
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