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Published: 2015-10-30 19:02:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 73; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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So I decited to post the entire journey of my first drawing with step by step and again, I request critisism.what do you think about the anatomy, the poses etc. I am very curious.
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*gets herself ready to get shit done*
the one on the left:
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the left shoulder (the one facing us) is out I bit much, maybe put it a bit closer to the neck a bit. plus the way you dawn is a bit weird, because the arm is higher then the shoulder and looks out of place.
the waist is a too inward, if you look at this: 3.bp.blogspot.com/-3_K9OSVEE6M…
you can see the waist is like near to the same size , if you see what I mean.
the legs are out of size, you need to make them the same (I forgot the word beat with it)
the one on right:
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errr, there is his left arm?
the legs again by that I mean the size.
what pose is he in? is his arm behind his leg?
the waist again.
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that's all I got now .I hope I did well I tried my best
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Got another one now: trotterreviews.deviantart.com/…
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I tried to redraw it a bit more to your wishes but I tried to keep the legs in a similar proportion since one is facing a little so the side and therefore has to appear wider since it is the inner leg.
And the left one doesn't have any arms yet but your comment on the shoulder has helped me a lot, thank you
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