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" I am a poor wayfaring strangerTravelling through this world of woe
There is no sickness, toil or danger
In that fairy land to which I go
I'm going home to see my mother
I'm going home no more to roam
I am just going over Jordan
I am just going over home"
Wayfaring Stranger - Jack White
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I have always loved this song, for me, it's more personal and deep than taking it litteraly. For me, I am a stranger of my own self. How many of us try to find our way "home". to find ourselfs, to find why are we here, what makes us happy.... So, I thought of portraying that, and I wanted to draw a city that looked sureal, strange, yet peacefull, and in this, I tried to give a mood of a far far away place, a place not known to man, yet, this stranger has reached it.
Is he finally home?
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hehe, first ever entry with NO stock photos whatsoever!!! I BRUSHED the whole thing, using my all new less then 24 hrs old digital tablet
comments, critique and fav!
EDIT: I listened to my friends tips and I changed it a bit.. made the man smaller, that way, he looks smaller in face of this HUGE city (metaphorically speaking), removed the grass (they were bothering a lot of people) and added a mist... sorry for those who fav. the one before and dont like this one....)
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Comments: 54
corpsebride00 [2006-03-22 13:11:14 +0000 UTC]
hehe well, i like this one
but SERGIO its pink a bit atleast
hehe doesnt that make u think
but i like it dnt worry....lol
though part 2 was better, but not bad
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sergiofx In reply to corpsebride00 [2006-03-22 19:53:33 +0000 UTC]
where do you see pink ya 3ayneh? its all orange.... try to fix that screen of yours
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Sawma [2005-11-09 11:51:49 +0000 UTC]
there isn't a single thing that i haven't loved about this pic.... absolutely beautiful!!!
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kimoz [2005-11-07 18:24:03 +0000 UTC]
a kickass one... awesome concept with awesome excute.. u got it
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Noko [2005-10-15 15:08:38 +0000 UTC]
I love it.......I like to see something different from ppl. I think it shows more of your talent.
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blackzer0 [2005-10-15 13:39:33 +0000 UTC]
Pretty cool, this is totally my kinda thing, huge landscape / tiny human figure.. reaaally my kinda thing. Great choice of colours, keep making these!
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sergiofx In reply to blackzer0 [2005-10-15 14:43:44 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, am glad you liked it...
as for the tablet, it's a 5'4' MousePen genius thingie
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blackzer0 In reply to sergiofx [2005-10-15 15:26:27 +0000 UTC]
alright! that's the one I have. But without a mouse. It's pretty good, cheap, and I like the little hotspots on the edges. But beware of damaging the pen, I tried to open it once to change the battery and it didn't work, instead it's all wobbly now.
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blackzer0 In reply to sergiofx [2005-10-15 21:48:25 +0000 UTC]
probably not actually, i just thought i was supposed to. i'm pretty sure there is no battery inside the pen, but at the time it was "attesh"ing a bit and it seemed thick enough to contain a battery so I thought I had to change it.
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claes-gascogne [2005-10-14 21:06:01 +0000 UTC]
nice usage of space, through colors. it did create the feel of perspective in it. i like the effect of the fog in the whole area. but the birds.. i think they needed the feel of more motion in them.
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TheFantaSim [2005-10-12 21:15:02 +0000 UTC]
I like the watercolor look you achieved in this image. And although is very minimal, it's says something to the viewer due to your choice of color and the way you placed the figure and birds.
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Chantaln [2005-10-12 12:46:24 +0000 UTC]
Wow Sergio, this is really beautiful work, I'm very impressed! I hope you'll do more pieces in this style - btw the color scheme is just perfect, well done!
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sergiofx In reply to Chantaln [2005-10-12 13:49:56 +0000 UTC]
thanks I am proud of this as well
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TheGhostWolf [2005-10-11 16:23:17 +0000 UTC]
My God. You brushed this whole thing?! Incredible!
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hAzArDoUs-ChEmIcAl [2005-10-10 04:27:43 +0000 UTC]
a radical change in your art i see (Yoda style)
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sergiofx In reply to hAzArDoUs-ChEmIcAl [2005-10-10 12:44:36 +0000 UTC]
hehe, thank you master HC
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EveryNextDream [2005-10-09 16:33:56 +0000 UTC]
This is so beautiful! I love the colours you've chosen...they remind of me sunrises. This picture makes me think of being lost in dreams...the kind of dream where you think you've woken up but then you realise that you still don't really know where you are and everything around you is kind of hazy. Like being lost, but not in a scary way. The comfort of anonymity.
Yay for the new tablet!
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sergiofx In reply to EveryNextDream [2005-10-09 16:45:59 +0000 UTC]
hehe, thanks for the comment
I also tried to go with a dream like picture, so I guess my point is made first, I thought I should make it in purple, you know, dream like, but then I thought that purple is a bit whored down for dreams, so I made it in orange.. and yes, I do know what it feels like to wake up from a dream only to find yourself in another one... damn, that is so strange!
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Ranya [2005-10-09 12:58:30 +0000 UTC]
So beautiful! it's so expressive, full of feelings.I'm not gonna critisize ur technics because it's just great the way it ended.
DEEEEP!What a mood!
And good luck with ur new tablet
are u a left handed?
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sergiofx In reply to Ranya [2005-10-09 15:46:07 +0000 UTC]
hehe, thanks I really appreciate your comment... and no, i am right handed, though I wish I was left handed
but why?
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Ranya In reply to sergiofx [2005-10-09 16:05:01 +0000 UTC]
well i'm left handed and i put my signature on my left side as u did
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sergiofx In reply to Ranya [2005-10-09 16:22:25 +0000 UTC]
ohhh, i never thought of that hehehe, wow, you're left handed, am so healous
seriously!
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Majnouna [2005-10-09 08:05:22 +0000 UTC]
I. Love. This. This is my kind of aesthetics, beautiful and simple yet intense. I love the subtle variety of hues, the brushed feel, the silhouettes, the way you almost but not quite centered them giving them some life. It's a very smart thing to have organized the birds and man in that 3-piece grid where each can be centered within its own piece without being centered relatively to each other, it gives a nice stability to it (I can't tell if centering the man within his own band more perfectly would lock the effect in place or weaken it, maybe you can try and decide). The man attracts the eye first because it's darkest, but then the eye moves naturally to the lightest area of the composition where the birds fly. It's just great.
The grass in the foreground however I just can't decide. It's a bit distracting without having anything to add. When I look at the rest I get the feeling like the signature should be in that corner, to create a presence that wouldn't interfere with the composition. I think if you removed the grass and put your signatrue there, a bit larger than you have it now, it would be perfect.
Kudos for not being bound to a single style
Congrats for the tablet!!
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sergiofx In reply to Majnouna [2005-10-09 15:47:53 +0000 UTC]
thanks
I really really appreciate a comment from you, and I kinda did what you said cause those grass were bothering me as well... So, I think this one is better, thanks a lot for the tips
and I love your artistic critic, it really makes my day when I read something like this... am glad you like it..
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Majnouna In reply to sergiofx [2005-10-09 16:04:54 +0000 UTC]
Yes Now it's perfect. Removing the grass made the depth subjective, adding a whole new richness as the viewer can project the landscape – personally what I see now is very powerful
Always happy to help those who sincerely want to grow!
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IDGAF [2005-10-09 05:58:15 +0000 UTC]
wow very different to ur tradtional dark art i still like it just as much i think u should of blurred it a little to make it look a little more dreamish sort of thing meh just an idea well i still think its awesome! i gots a tablet now too! its pretty and green and see threw! heh well i have heat stroke so im goin to go get some rest!
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sergiofx In reply to IDGAF [2005-10-09 06:27:24 +0000 UTC]
hehehe, thanks yes, after i uploaded it, I saw that it needs a bit of mist where the stranger is standing, it needs to be a little more blurred... so, Ill see if i change it, whether it will be a bit different and better or not...
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Smuggler-Of-Mos-Espa [2005-10-09 04:22:44 +0000 UTC]
I don't know why, but this is just fucking blowing my mind. So smooth. I love the style, colors, and details. Nice quote, as well. You should try more paintings of this style.
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sergiofx In reply to Smuggler-Of-Mos-Espa [2005-10-09 06:18:14 +0000 UTC]
hehe thanks man yes, I will try more stuff this way, and slowly integrate them in dark art. not much though, it will all depend on my mood. Its just that with this piece, I feel better cause I know I can control the tablet. When I first got it, I didnt know how to use it and I felt bad cause I thought it wasnt going to help me. Now that I know it will, I can start practicing more and expanding in evey direction...
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Smuggler-Of-Mos-Espa In reply to sergiofx [2005-10-10 03:16:15 +0000 UTC]
Good to hear, amigo.
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hereditarynarcissism [2005-10-09 04:21:43 +0000 UTC]
This is so different from your usual, dark pieces, and it just goes to show that there are a lot of different sides to people.
The colours in this are excellent, and the different shades of orange look really good in contrast with the black of the person.
I love the overall look of this... I Like it a lot
Congrats on getting your tablet darlin!
Love you
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sergiofx In reply to hereditarynarcissism [2005-10-09 06:21:50 +0000 UTC]
thanks sweetie... I'm glad you liked the colors, cause I was going for a purplish color at first, with all the different shades of course, but then I saw that it was used too much, so i changed it to this..
thanks
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hereditarynarcissism In reply to sergiofx [2005-10-09 07:18:40 +0000 UTC]
cool... I think purple may have been a little bit strange. Surreal, but not quite in the mood I see with the orange.
I pictured it all in purple, and I like it in orange better
Love ya.
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muadhnait [2005-10-09 00:07:45 +0000 UTC]
"Home is where the heart is".
Wonderful layers of colors.
The only thing you could improve are the (weeds) brushes to the right.
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sergiofx In reply to muadhnait [2005-10-09 06:22:30 +0000 UTC]
weed huh? lol
what do you mean? what can I improve about them?
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muadhnait In reply to sergiofx [2005-10-09 08:46:36 +0000 UTC]
...well, whatever it takes to help you on the journey.
They just don't blend well with the background, they should be a bit "smoother", blurrier, or maybe not there at all.
The rest of the composition is in perfect harmony.
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muadhnait [2005-10-09 00:07:36 +0000 UTC]
"Home is where the heart is".
Wonderful layers of colors.
The only thing you could improve are the (weeds) brushes to the left.
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odj310388 [2005-10-09 00:07:02 +0000 UTC]
sergio usualy I dont comment on your work since dark art doesnt usualy interest me but this piece opened my eyes to the fact that you are a very good artist and should be appreiated for any kind of work you do. Nice work.
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sergiofx In reply to odj310388 [2005-10-09 06:23:45 +0000 UTC]
why thank you I appreciate you commenting on this work, (since as you said, you dont comment on my dark stuff), so, am glad about that
I should try all different type of art, that way, I can attract more audience and see where I can REALLY shine.. thanks
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konomama [2005-10-08 22:16:24 +0000 UTC]
Absolutly astonishing, I love how you have captured this. It really plays with my mind.
You've inspired me.
A question though. How did you get the ripple effect in the water with brushes?
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