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Published: 2014-04-08 08:17:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 917; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Description The first person to lay their eyes on the Oort went mad.

In those first days, when humanity finally achieved near-light-speed travel, we didn't see any artistry in the stars, any poetry to our endeavors. We saw endless desolation, we saw gamma radiation, we saw black holes swallow up entire star systems, we saw a lot of random radio noise from dying stars and rogue gas giants. With the Oort, we saw one hundred thousand astronomical units of randomly dispersed clumps of ice, silent and nearly motionless in near-total dark.

When the first colony was set up in orbit of Proxima Centauri, it was placed on a completely uninhabited ball of rock and water, a planet that by all means could have had earth-like life on it but which was inexplicably uninhabited. There were others. Upsilon Andromedae, 359 Wolf, Gliese 445. A thousand years past and a handful of worlds were made into new earths. Humanity grew into a small empire, spanning one hundred light years, inhabiting thirty worlds.

We had no purpose. Wars still ravaged continents. Bigotry still prevailed over brotherhood. Our only importance was that which we made for ourselves, for we saw that earth was the only planet to give rise to life unaided. Some of us thought ourselves to be gods.

And then, on one of the outermost colonies, astronomers discovered a shattering truth.

Ripples in spacetime, emanating from novae. Stretching across three thousand light years was a string of burst stars, each preceded by a gravitational scar. As they lined up clearly in the lenses and radio telescopes on that distant world, it was made abundantly clear an unnatural phenomenon had torn through the galaxy, destroying particular systems in a line. Each nova was approximately one hundred light years from the previous, and the human astronomers deduced their system was next.

A plea was sent out across the endless desolation, the gamma radiation, the black holes that devoured whole systems, the radio-emitting rogue gas giants. It was sent to every human world, begging humanity to come together and face this threat, whatever it might be. Their pleas met with a mixed response--some colonies prepared for war, others laughed away the astronomer's predictions as insane for their dead universe.

The pleas went on and on, all across the empire, though they took one century to reach the furthest reaches. One day, they went quiet. As fast as the speed of light would allow, each of our worlds saw the nova engulf what had once been that noisome, desperate speck on the galactic tapestry. The pleas were no longer ignored by anyone.

This force, however, tore through our race's holdings. While before only single stars had been destroyed, every stellar object that gave light to a human colony exploded. It was known that this was no simple coincidence; an intelligence was inexplicably, inexorably exterminating us. We reacted in the only way we knew how; we built armies and fleets and we sent them in the direction of the nearest blast at near-light speed. No ships ever returned. Reports were mundane for months or years until they halted without warning.

We were going extinct. We, on the last planet, accepted our fate. We loaded a probe with the sum total of all human knowledge. We put it on a conventional rocket and fired it into the endless desolation, the gamma radiation, the black holes, the territory of rogue gas giants. We knew the chances of it being discovered were beyond negligible.

This has been the introduction to our final message. Please, remember us.

Please, find purpose. Before it is too late.
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Comments: 17

Lady-Pilot [2017-10-17 08:39:24 +0000 UTC]

Interesting...and scary

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laurotica [2014-04-12 01:19:11 +0000 UTC]

The first line kind of makes it seem like this unstoppable force has been within the Oort Cloud all along, but that's just what I got from that. Β Otherwise, I always enjoy a good piece of space sci-fi, and a good apocalypse, and together...where can you go wrong? Β I also like the approach you took of turning the story into a final message. Β Very well done

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Diamondzcraft [2014-04-09 05:34:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow o.o This was beautifully written, and the paragraphs weren't all random and just some sentences thrown together. Please continue to write, because I'm sure it'll be amazing Β 

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SgtPossum In reply to Diamondzcraft [2014-04-09 19:58:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Subaqueous [2014-04-09 04:55:53 +0000 UTC]

For me, the first line set up the story as horror-genre. I'm familiar with what the Oort Cloud is, but someone who isn't might be confused at first. Just stating it as the Oort Cloud would smooth that over. All in all, a good short story with a strong core. I'll even favourite it...it is relevant to a narrative that I'm writing for a machinentity that I built for my final project in Advanced Sculpture.
I think what I valued most in your story was the stating of the baffling, apparently omnipotent threat, and you did it without any unnecessary descriptive baggage. =]

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SgtPossum In reply to Subaqueous [2014-04-09 05:04:28 +0000 UTC]

Originally, I was considering writing something a little closer to horror. It might've been handy to be a little more specific as to what the Oort Cloud is, I agree. Thanks for reading and commenting!

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artingstravist [2014-04-09 04:43:27 +0000 UTC]

this was pretty rad

i always like it when space is portrayed as a really terrifying place and this
well
it does a really good job of that

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SgtPossum In reply to artingstravist [2014-04-09 05:02:48 +0000 UTC]

Heh, I'm glad to hear that. Thanks for reading!

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protalgoingkitty [2014-04-09 04:00:13 +0000 UTC]

I will put this in my favs so I can read this later

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SgtPossum In reply to protalgoingkitty [2014-04-09 05:03:02 +0000 UTC]

Much appreciated.

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entropyintrovert [2014-04-09 03:43:59 +0000 UTC]

You should make a second part for it. You did a good job.

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SgtPossum In reply to entropyintrovert [2014-04-09 05:03:26 +0000 UTC]

I'll probably re-use the premise for something a little more personal. Thanks!

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entropyintrovert In reply to SgtPossum [2014-04-09 13:45:27 +0000 UTC]

No problem. I'm looking forward to it!Β 

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AaronArreguin [2014-04-08 19:37:47 +0000 UTC]

I like the strange idea that earth is the (only) orgin of life, and I like the tone of the narrator calm , yet concerned which has an interesting contrast to the end of the universe.

Ilike how its interesting with such few words, you got talent there guy

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SgtPossum In reply to AaronArreguin [2014-04-08 21:44:25 +0000 UTC]

Could be the case. I remember hearing something a little while ago about a study that showed it would take at least as long as the universe has existed to produce complex life, possibly longer, and that earth could be a statistical fluke. This would make for a very, very empty universe. Not sure if I buy that, though.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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safia3 [2014-04-08 08:54:56 +0000 UTC]

I didn't really notice the first line didn't fit until you mentioned it, but honestly, it's what drew me in to start with. This was like a cross between Stephen King and Ray Bradbury...and it reminded me of both while I was reading it. I'd like to think a thousand years hence, things like religion and intolerance would finally fall by the wayside and the human race would be united...but this is probably closer to the truth. How sad though, to imagine a vast, magnificent universe without a single living thing left to appreciate it. :/ Β  Β  Β Β 

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SgtPossum In reply to safia3 [2014-04-08 21:43:13 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, I'm really flattered that it reminded you of Mr. Bradbury. He's one of my favorite writers. Thank you for reading and providing feedback!

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