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Published: 2009-01-13 03:51:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1021; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 10
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base by- [link]i made this peom in math thinking about one of my dreams i had...so i just started writing it down...
hre's the peom-
In the night you hear
A shrill scream in your ear
You look around and found
Your body on the ground
You see people gathering near by
They won’t answer you and you wish it was all a lie
You know your dead and can’t go back the way you came
Your in the after-life all the same
You try and try to cry out
But find no voice to let out
You lost all you worked so hard for
And as a result, your screaming yourself to the core
You’ve figured out it’s not a lie
And pray to God you’ll surely die
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Comments: 15
nothing-is-here [2009-01-13 17:04:56 +0000 UTC]
yay ^^ This is a cool poem, I like the meaning... But you based this on a dream? I haven't had an understandable dream in a while, I mean I know what happens but it doesn't make sense. Anyway, thumbs up to the poem.
~Tom
P.S I wrote a poem as well, check it out if ya want, It's the only text in my gallery, rofl
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Shadow-Dreamer-96 In reply to nothing-is-here [2009-01-13 21:29:44 +0000 UTC]
lol...yeah this was based off of a dream i had...'s hard to decifer my dreams. the dream this is based off of happened Hune 26th, 2008...i have a long term memory...
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nothing-is-here In reply to Shadow-Dreamer-96 [2009-01-15 19:31:04 +0000 UTC]
Scrap my fist comment, the night AFTER I posted that comment I had a very clear dream. About a talking white tiger, testing roller coasters and a lot of running... yeh... Wtf?
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Shadow-Dreamer-96 In reply to nothing-is-here [2009-01-13 21:29:36 +0000 UTC]
lol...yeah this was based off of a dream i had. it's hard to decifer my dreams. the dream this is based off of happened Hune 26th, 2008...i have a long term memory...
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