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WickedWitchWalking [2014-07-23 21:36:07 +0000 UTC]

Sehr schöne Modellfotos!
So große Modelle können zwar echt anstrengend sein aber manchmal sind die Bilder die man so bekommt fast schon wieder schneller und besser als aufwendiges Rendern .
Mal ganz abgesehen von dem schicken Design (das hat fast was orientalisches wie ich finde), mag ochs ganz besonders, dass du die Möbel und Einbauten tatsächlich auch gebaut hast und nicht nur reingephotoshopt (was für nen wort.. xD).
Ich bin generell nicht so ganz der Fan von den dunklen Lasercutter-Kanten aber die sind in der Hinsicht ja schlecht vermeidbar, außer man besprüht oder bemalt das ganze Modell danach nochmal...
Interessant hätte ich es glaub mit 1-2 Menschen bzw Silhouetten noch drin gefunden .
Ah und mein einzig wirklicher kleiner Kritikpunkt (was aber auch wieder persönlicher Geschmack ist):
Ich hätte den Boden nen bisschen entsättigt oä. Irgendwie knallt der so arg rein.
Zum Schluss noch nen ganz anderer kleiner Fakt/Frage: 
Brauchst du nicht eigentlich nen zweiten Rettungsweg? Weil theoretisch laufen ja beide deiner Treppen über das gleiche notwendige Treppenhaus oder? @.@ praktischer Brandschutz sucks  so manchmal xD

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fernando79 [2014-07-21 23:53:05 +0000 UTC]

I can only assume the tremendous work you went under to produce this, I congratulate you on completing another semester which brings you closer to your goal. There are a few things I would like to point out, please don't take this personal, which is a mistake I often did in my years as a student.
1) strictly speaking of drawing, your floor texture should have been different, or at least mapped out in a different scale, it seems to grainy. nothing a simple setting can't change.
2) structurally speaking, the ceiling is not supported by the beams comming outwards from the center, in fact they don't even touch. perhaps it's a drawing mistake, which I often make.
3) still speaking of structure, the columns are too slender from my perspective to be made out of concrete, are they steel perhaps?
4) the staircase in the very center, doesn't seem to lead anywhere, in here I may ask what's is it purpose? since you have another staircase with a nice handrail outside of what I think it's an elevator shaft. (this reminded me of a teacher, who was more of a nuisance than a teacher, who kept on asking me on every project "How do I go up?" and when I showed him the staircase he immediately asked "How do I go down?", that and despite being the design class and not the utilities class, he kept on asking where the water tanks were meant to go) 
5) speaking of the staircase with the handrail, on the top view left side, it seems to be "unleveled", I mean the outer side of the staircase seems to be higher than the inner side. It's probably the camera settings but it does give that feel. 
I hope you don't mind my observations, I speak from the outside without fully knowing the scope and objectives of your project. 

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