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“Nothing.”

His voice was a low hiss, laced with dripping poison and hatred deeper than any weapon could ever penetrate through his skin. The room was lit with nothing but the glow of his blood-red eyes and the faint pink radiance of a hand emitting energy that could slice through a sheet of metal. The hand clenched, the eyes narrowing with every passing second. He moved closer, staring into his eyes. “Say it.”

The figure hung on the wall, body held up by chains that attached to his wrists and legs. His eyes were dull, lifeless. Yet his chest moved up and down, showing the signs of life he didn’t seem to want to exhibit. The green hue flickered as his eyelids drooped downward. Blood dribbled down his chin, glowing with the emerald hue of his eyes. His voice rubbed with the air like sandpaper, no emotion evident. “No.”

“Fool,” he whispered. “You think you have hope? You will never have any. You have never had any in the first place. I took it all away from you. Don’t you remember?” The hand came closer. “No, of course you wouldn’t. Too foolish to live in your own fantasies, too oblivious to the truth staring at you right in the eyes.”

Green met red. Life met death. Hate met love.

Yin and yang. That’s what everyone thought of them. It was unsure of how the two finally came to this predicament of being taken as a hostage and a kidnapper, but it really didn’t matter in the eyes of the city anymore. There were no heroes and villains. There was only Phantom and Plasmius- the two sole creatures left on the planet who were never able to completely fit into society. And now here they were, one about to destroy the other- or so it seemed.

The white hair now had a tint of red. “Who was foolish enough to kill Mom?” he rasped sadly. The fist slammed across his face, drawing more blood and other gasp of quiet pain. The monster bared his fangs, prepared to strike once more. Plasmius made not a sound, but his lips were curled into some sort of hateful glare. The prisoner he held captive hit a sort of invisible nerve in the captor and smiled weakly. It was what he was best at. “You don’t get it. I’m already the lowest of the low. There’s no point in making me feel like shit.”

“Then you’ll have no issue in saying it, child,” he rasped again.

The head shook from side to side. “I can’t.”

A hand shot out and grabbed the boy’s throat. “You are nothing. I can walk all over you, and you wouldn’t give a damn if I killed you. I could destroy everything in your life, and it wouldn’t mean anything. Oh, but wait.” The eyes twinkled for a split second before reigniting with fury. “I already did. And all you did was try to go for Dark Dan. You didn’t take into account that I was there, did you?” The hand tightened around his throat. “No, of course not. When would you bring that sort of idea into the situation, hmmm?

“Look at you. A worthless excuse for a hero.” The hand let go of the neck, only to be driven into his face. “Everything is gone, child. Don’t you understand? I won when you and I first met. It was only a matter of time before I had you in checkmate- all I had to do was make my moves when I saw fit to do so.” The hand slammed into the nose. “And all you could do was defend yourself. You thought you had destroyed me- but you didn’t.” His lips curled. “You can’t kill a half-ghost.”

Phantom made no noises, his eyes fading and losing all touch with reality.

“You can’t kill me. I will always be here to haunt you in your dreams, to make sure your life will continue to be a living hell!” The fist drove into his stomach now. “I have won, and you are worth nothing, child! Nothing at all!”

Silence.

“Say it! Now!”

Phantom hung his head, his voice numb, blank.

“I am nothing...”
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Comments: 49

thepie36 [2011-08-23 07:32:06 +0000 UTC]

....maybe I shouldn't be reading all of this angst when I'm exhasted....

poor Danny D"8
that was wonderful, but....reading that made me feel like shit. I hate Vlad so much right now....
.....-runs off crying-

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Mrkaalerabistappe [2010-10-26 12:37:32 +0000 UTC]

so incredible touching! love it!! great work!

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Shining-Zephyr In reply to Mrkaalerabistappe [2011-08-23 16:58:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.

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Mrkaalerabistappe In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2011-08-23 17:14:36 +0000 UTC]

Anytime!

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Elspethelf-Arha [2010-10-26 06:54:20 +0000 UTC]

woah......that was great!

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Shining-Zephyr In reply to Elspethelf-Arha [2010-10-26 07:49:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. <3

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Elspethelf-Arha In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2010-10-26 08:53:27 +0000 UTC]

youre welcome

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jinx-lin [2010-06-11 01:38:53 +0000 UTC]

Angst.
Gosh, I love this. So much. D:

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Shining-Zephyr In reply to jinx-lin [2010-06-11 06:21:35 +0000 UTC]

<33 Thanks. So happy you like this.

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Hawkflyer667 [2010-02-19 13:03:06 +0000 UTC]

What I want to know is what is with us DP lovers and pure torture? O.o Why do we put Danny through this stuff? Haha.

Actually. I love it with every fiber of my being, so I can't be the one asking that question. Teehee.

O.O AMAZING STORY. I loved the part about Yin and Yang. Usually thats used to explain Phantom and Fenton, but I love how you changed it around and made it into Phantom and Plasmius. <3 VERY NICE.

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Shining-Zephyr In reply to Hawkflyer667 [2010-02-21 21:17:56 +0000 UTC]

<3 Thank you very much. I'm so glad you enjoyed this.

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Chibi-kyubi-kun [2010-02-18 23:20:35 +0000 UTC]

wow...this is feaking amazing....like wow...i am seriously at a loss of words
i am looking forward to your next piece

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Shining-Zephyr In reply to Chibi-kyubi-kun [2010-02-18 23:50:41 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

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Silk-Ward [2010-02-18 02:00:08 +0000 UTC]

It certainly is very dramatic, is written very well. and it leaves the reader wondering (well maybe not all the readers but me for sure) what's going to happen next if something does happen, will it go on like this or will phantom regain his honor, after all, like you wrote, "you can't kill a half-ghost".
of course i'm speculating, i don't think you'd want to write a sequel to this.

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Shining-Zephyr In reply to Silk-Ward [2010-02-21 03:48:32 +0000 UTC]

A sequel... hmm...

NOW I'm intrigued. I want to think about that now.

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Silk-Ward In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2010-02-21 04:18:08 +0000 UTC]

yay~

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ShusaiyaWolfGurl [2010-01-18 05:56:24 +0000 UTC]

This is love, thank you for making my grounding.

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Shining-Zephyr In reply to ShusaiyaWolfGurl [2010-01-18 06:04:25 +0000 UTC]

o///o You're welcome?

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ShusaiyaWolfGurl In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2010-01-18 18:36:06 +0000 UTC]

I have been so bored SINCE I got grounded, I really needed this, lovely depression peice. THANK YOU.

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VMenFangirl [2009-09-20 06:02:34 +0000 UTC]

butter cookies... this is angstly awesome! ... why?...tell me why you makes me love Vlad when he is so evil??? how you can makes possible that effect on me???

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Shining-Zephyr In reply to VMenFangirl [2009-09-20 15:54:51 +0000 UTC]

Just a... lucky talent I've learned to develop? Not sure, hun. I love him when he's a murderous and sadistic bastard, I guess. It's always my hoping someone will follow me with that Vlad and not always te sane minded villain he was in season 1. I'm really glad you liked this. Really.

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VMenFangirl In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2009-09-20 17:17:45 +0000 UTC]

XD ...i see... and i understand you perfectly, for some reason i love him when he is exactly!...murderous and sadistic bastard LOL XD.
Yeah!... well... in my point of view i can say that i love him anyway, as a sane minded villain or as a psycho. I think that he was kinda shy and good (egocentric too XD)... when he was young (also before become a halfa)... but i think that Plasmius represents his darkest feelings and since VLad becomes a halfa, Plasmius dominated him, ya know... good side VS dark side (is just a theory, XD i like make those psychological analysis of the villains i like LOL XD...overall with guys like him that i consider complex XD)

And again, you´re very welcome!! ... your stories are amazing *w*

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follybunny [2009-08-07 20:42:30 +0000 UTC]

w00p w00p! endless torturing for the poor Daniel continues. Why is it so interesting to read/write/draw?
Alas, the answer to this question is but a slight mystery.


oh and btw ILY.

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Shining-Zephyr In reply to follybunny [2009-08-07 20:53:11 +0000 UTC]

Mmmm, it IS a mystery. XD


ILU2

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follybunny In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2009-08-07 21:18:13 +0000 UTC]

:3

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Moonlight-Umbreon [2009-08-03 19:17:55 +0000 UTC]

Shine, you already know what I think of this. How could I possibly stop myself from faving?

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Shining-Zephyr In reply to Moonlight-Umbreon [2009-08-03 19:24:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Moon. Really.

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Moonlight-Umbreon In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2009-08-03 19:26:16 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, of course.

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PhantomGoddess94 [2009-08-02 18:29:57 +0000 UTC]

I loved it on FF.net, and I love it here

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Shining-Zephyr In reply to PhantomGoddess94 [2009-08-02 19:00:24 +0000 UTC]

D'aww, thanks.

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PhantomGoddess94 In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2009-08-02 19:43:02 +0000 UTC]

anytime

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Shades-Of-Change [2009-08-02 02:38:22 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful and poigant, Shiny. The whole thing is positively raditating emotion. You got everything down perfect.

~Shades

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Shining-Zephyr In reply to Shades-Of-Change [2009-08-02 02:41:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Shades. Makes me a very happy girl that you liked it.

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Shades-Of-Change In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2009-08-02 02:47:29 +0000 UTC]



In fact, your writing just inspired me to do some more DP art, once I have everything else completed. (which will be within the week...)

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Shining-Zephyr In reply to Shades-Of-Change [2009-08-02 03:19:49 +0000 UTC]

I didn't do it. I just wrote it.

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Liquid-Sun [2009-08-01 21:31:14 +0000 UTC]

I've been watching it lately, and you're right!
It is a awesome show! Nice fanfic by the way!

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Shining-Zephyr In reply to Liquid-Sun [2009-08-01 22:54:23 +0000 UTC]

Heh. Thanks. Thanks a lot.

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Liquid-Sun In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2009-08-01 22:57:28 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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MARoy [2009-08-01 21:20:15 +0000 UTC]

awesome, i have to appluade your angsty ways of writing

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Shining-Zephyr In reply to MARoy [2009-08-01 22:57:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, hun.

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cordria [2009-08-01 19:50:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh, yes, you can't beat chains for torture devices. May I recommend using them more next time? Put in a few deathly clanks and the feel of the shackles biting into his wrists? *rubs hands gleefully*

This was AWESOME. You're such a wonderful angst writer. You've really got down the character of Plasmius and you really know how to rub it in Phantom's face. The total polarity of their personalities, bitten by the realization that Plasmius was winning all along.

Fabulous.

-Cori

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Shining-Zephyr In reply to cordria [2009-08-02 01:55:30 +0000 UTC]

YUSH. Next time I will use TWICE as many chaining devices!

Oh, Cori. I'm so glad you liked this and everything. It was a crazy idea at first, but then it just kind of blossomed into something spectacular and everything. I'm really really happy that you enjoyed this thing. You know Vlad's my favorite character of all time, no doubt, but knowing that I got into the personality from him coming from you- it just totally made my day better.

Thanks a ton, Cori.

~Shiny-sama

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cordria In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2009-08-02 18:59:18 +0000 UTC]

Twice as many chains makes it twice as good. Oh yes.



-Cori

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secret-spy-guy [2009-08-01 12:55:06 +0000 UTC]

I loved it. Loved the angst and the tension, and just the overall set up of the whole thing. Very very good.

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Shining-Zephyr In reply to secret-spy-guy [2009-08-01 17:12:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Spy. Makes meh happy that you enjoyed it a lot.

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secret-spy-guy In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2009-08-04 00:44:51 +0000 UTC]

Yup. And I'm looking forward to the day of angst too.

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Hordaks-Pupil [2009-08-01 08:27:43 +0000 UTC]

An awesome story, once again you prove yourself the goddess of agnst. I loved it

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Shining-Zephyr In reply to Hordaks-Pupil [2009-08-01 17:20:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Hordak.

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Hordaks-Pupil In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2009-08-01 17:41:12 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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