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Description Hi, I'm Darkkit. I live with my Clan. Exept... I don't really care about it... But this is my story! Enjoy!


"She's beautiful!" screamed Dawnfeather, staring at the black kit instead of her other two brothers. her eyes were tight shut.
she sneezed and fell back. "I will name her Darkkit!" She squealed and these two, "Brokenkit, and Lonekit!" She was
exited to see her three new born kits, healthy and strong exept Darkkit. The small one that looked like a scary shadow.
Moonpool sighed, he was the medicine cat, never liked his job, always alone. "..." Darkkit stayed quiet. The only one. Darkkit's two
brothers squealing in everyone's ears. The shadowy kit stepped over to her mom's black fur and began to suckle.
What a life Darkkit was going to find ahead of her.

Four moons later the medicine cat had died from old age and a new, young apprentice was now a medicine cat,
Flowerdust. Darkkit's eyes were open and so were her other brother's they played around with the moss ball and
Darkkit unsheathed her tiny claws. Brokenkit and Lonekit gasped and growled, their claws still sheathed into their
paws. "Now, now, Darkkit. No claws aloud in the nursery." Dawnfeather sighed with a smile. Darkkit frowned. "Wheres daddy?"
She sighed. "Daddy is out hunting." Dawnfeather smiled with pride of her mate. "I want him now!" She commanded.
"No, no. Daddy is a warrior, he must do his job." "But momma." Darkkit pounced at her mother. Dawnflower halted
her. "I'm a warrior!" Darkkit growled "The strongest warrior in the forest. I will destroy any clan that comes in my
way! I am leader of CrimsonClan!" She howled. Dawnfeather watched Darkkit. "Oh no!" She rolled over, playing dead.
Darkkit pounced at her mom again and let out a, "Roar!" Darkkit heard a snap and so did Dawnfeather. Her eyes got
wide. "Brokenkit! Lonekit!" She got up and raced over seeing them. Blood oozed down their eyes, heads. Death was
in their eyes. "No!" Dawnfeather howled "What caused this?" She cried. Every cat peeked out of the dens. Then
Darkkit, the only one saw an orange shape walk away from her. A fox? This must have caused her brother's death.
She stayed quiet. "What happened?" She already knew what had happened, but to sound like a helpless kit she had
to sound like it. "... They died..." Her mom sighed and tears flowed from her face. "B-but..." Darkkit stared at the blood
for a long time then suddenly saw that her mom had both of her dead brothers in her mouth. The leader, Forgotenstar
paced out of his den "..." He watched as Dawnfeather set them down in the middle of the camp. Every warrior,
apprentice and member of the clan yowled at the sky.

Hours later, or moons it felt her brothers were burried in the dark soil of the ground, Dawnfeather was mourning in
pain along with Darkkit's dad, Waterstorm. Dawnfeather slowly walked into the nursery and Waterstorm headed
for the warrior's den. "Mom..." Darkkit whispered as she woke up. "I-I'm sorry..." She whispered. Dawnfeather smiled
with a tear flowing down her face. "It's alright, Darkkit. Atleast I still have you..." She licked Darkkit's black fur and
fell asleep.

It was finally a moon later and Darkkit was now Darkpaw. She could remember the echoing in her ears, "From this
day forward, until you earn you're warrior name, you will be known as Darkpaw. Serve your clan well..."
Forgotenstar smiled and let Darkpaw jump off the high rock. Her brothers would be apprentices today too, not if it
was for that fox and their death. Not even the clan had understood their death but only Darkpaw would, Lonepaw and
Brokenpaw, they would make fine warriors. "Darkpaw, your mentor will be Bloodstripe..." Forgotenstar growled.
Then suddenly Forgotenstar jumped off the rock, he looked old and rotten. He must have
been on his second life, close to death. Darkpaw shrugged and padded over to Bloodstripe "Bloodstripe, can we go train?"
Bloodstripe shook his head "Not today, Darkpaw." He spat in her face feircly. "Get some rest and be ready to
wake up early in the morning tomorrow, we have a long day." "Alright..." Darkpaw stalked over to the apprentice den.
her dark, shadowy pelt gleaming in the sun.

At dawn Darkpaw was shoved awake by Bloodstripe "It's time for training." He growled and unsheathed his claws in a
deadly warning. "A-alright." She looked at his bloody stained claws. She got up swiftly and made her eyes go to slits.
Bloodstripe ran out of the apprentice den, not letting Darkpaw get some food. "Wha-" Bloodstripe growled. Save some
for the clan. Darkpaw followed him swiftly and bumped into him right when they reached a dark hollow. "It's time."
He waited for Darkpaw to get up from the ground from bumping into him. "Alright!" Bloodstripe looked back at her
"Watch." He swifty grabbed hold of a bush and tackled it down into a pin then stuck his claws at the top of the bush
which was actually the enemy warrior's neck and dug his claws into it then stuck his teeth into the bottom of the bush.
Which was the enemy warrior's underbelly and he tugged his head down, ripping the bush like a huge gap in the
warrior's chest. It looked deadly "Wow." Darkpaw snickered and jumped at the bush she did exactly as Bloodstripe did.
"..." He stayed quiet. She was a quick learner, a quick learner indeed. "Impressive." He mumbled.

Many moons later Darkpaw was now almost a warrior, and many things had changed, Forgotenstar was on his last
life. "Now, do that move again." Bloodstripe spat at Darkpaw. "Yes!" She smiled and raked her claws across a tree and
flipped around and bit into the tree's trunk. "It's time... You are now a warrior, Darkpaw." He smiled and led her back
to the clan. "Everyone!" A warrior shouted. "Dawnfeather and Waterstorm..." She yowled "Their- D-Dead!" The warrior
was spazzed out and Darkpaw watched frightened "N-No!" She yowled. "I'm sorry, Darkpaw..." The warrior frowned.
They died from a pack of wolves..." She licked Darkpaw's head and a tear ran down Darkpaw's face. "Grr...." She
stopped crying. "What am I to do of this crying?" She felt herself tensing and Bloodstripe watched her. "Forgotenstar...
She needs to become a warrior." Bloodstripe whispered to him when he went over to the old leader. "Alright, right
after we burry Dawnfeather and Waterstorm." He rasped "No,no no, Forgotenstar." The spazzed warrior whispered.
"We only found a track of blood and a stench of Waterstorm and Dawnfeather's scent mixed with wolf scent. I'm afraid
we can't find them." She went to the warriors den with her head down. "B-but..." Darkpaw watched but didn't let a tear roll
down her face. Forgotenstar nodded and stepped onto the high rock. "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey
join down under the high rock." He yowled in an echo. Murmurs of questions rippled through the crowd of cats below
"Dawnfeather and Waterclaw are now dead, taken away and ripped to shreads from a wolf pack. On the other hand I
have some great news... Darkpaw please step up on the high rock, please." Darkpaw smiled and frowned at the same
time. Her expression was actually unreadable. "Darkpaw, you have trained well and now it is time to become a
warrior." Then after the anouncment, Forgotenstar finally said her new name, Darkblood. "Darkblood! Darkblood!"
Everyone cheered and Bloodstripe smiled at her.

It was now three moons later. Bloodstripe was dead, Flowerdust the medicine cat had died also and Forgotenstar
looked older than ever. Darkblood was sitting under a tree in the shadows, her life was nothing now. She looked at the
leader and snickered "Old peice of fresh kill." Her yellow eyes glared in hatred. She got up and padded over to the old
leader "Come with me to the river, Forgotenstar." She fake smiled. Forgotenstar nodded and limped after her to a
nearby river. "Forgotenstar, please tell me. What life you are on." She whispered with a smirk. "I'm on my last." His
voice cracked. "Oh..." She smiled. "Forgotenstar, its time for you to be forgoten!" She pinned him to the ground and did
the first move that Bloodstripe had taught her. He was dead, it was clear to see, blood oozing from his chest. She
smirked and a ruffle in the bushes stepped out swiftly "Darkblood!" The voice yelled. Darkblood froze. "Uh-
Smallripple! Isn't it nice to see you!" She smiled. "What did you just do?" She yelled. "Go back to the clan! I must tell
every warrior what happened!" She tensed and picked up Forgotenstar's dead body and stomped back to camp.
Darkblood growled and slowly reached the camp. "Everyone! Darkblood has caused a death! To one of our clan mates!"
Smallripple squealed. Everyone gasped "I knew that black peice of fox dung wasn't worth anything to this clan!" "Yeah, she
doesn't belong here!" Darkblood reached the camp "Get out!" They screamed. Darkblood snickered. "No." She smiled
evily at her clanmates. The clan yowled "Attack!" They charged at her and slammed her into a tree. "Gah!" A large
tom stood over her, Leafsong. "Get out!" He slashed at her eye and she felt a cast of darkness in her left eye. Her eye...
It was now gone... She yowled and raced out of the camp and bumped into a brown tom. "Wha-?" Her eye was bleeding
harshly. "Hey! Watch where your- Oh, oh, oh..." He stared at her torn apart face. "Please come with me..." He beconed
her with his tail and he walked into a small entrance. He licked her torn up face and rushed her over to a den. This
was a clan. "What-" Darkblood looked around. "This is the medicine cat den. She will treat you." The tom whispered,
he had hate in his eyes but he didn't want to hurt the torn up she-cat, Darkblood. "I'm Fallendeath." He smiled.
"Leader of AcidClan." "Bu- if you are leader then why isn't your name Fallenstar?" "Well, its a long story but just relax.

A day later Darkblood woke up, her face was numb but she felt a little better. She couldn't beleive that she couldn't see
that much life any more. Fallendeath walked in. "What's your name?" He asked "I'm Darkblood... I just got chased out
of my clan..." She sighed. "Hmm... Well you are welcome to stay in AcidClan." He smiled and looked at the high rock.
"Would you like me to do anything for you?" He looked at me. "Well... Since I might be in this clan... I would like to
change my name... So... Well CrimsonClan won't know me anymore..." Darkblood looked away, covering her face.
"Alright..." He smiled and jumped onto the high rock. "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey join under
the high rock!" He yowled. Everyone soon gathered and Darkblood walked out of the medicine cat den. "We have a new
cat in our clan!" He let out. "Darkblood!" Darkblood climbed up with a frown as everyone stared at her face. "Her name
will be changed." He anounced. "Darkblood, you are now... Moonshadow..."

THE END XDDD
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Comments: 3

rosetheeevee12 [2010-11-20 14:00:43 +0000 UTC]

nice but on one of the parts you said waterstorms name was waterclaw

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shinx2eevee In reply to rosetheeevee12 [2010-11-21 03:17:04 +0000 UTC]

Just forget it o-e

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rosetheeevee12 In reply to shinx2eevee [2010-11-22 19:07:10 +0000 UTC]

Okay

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