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Published: 2011-06-23 00:43:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 3198; Favourites: 95; Downloads: 69
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Did this while at my internship thing today... not the best thing in the world. Should have drawn something different.Related content
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yeah i didnt like this as much as i did when i was creating it. oh well... cheers anyway
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Nice start. My main crit would be that your lighting direction is inconsistent. You have a strong shadow directly underneath implying a strong direct light from above yet half the head is in relatively strong shadow. And maybe try a more dynamic pose or even just a 3/4 pose?
In other news: how's the intern thingy going?
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i whole heartedly agree with your comment good sir! its all a bit wonky. Basically I just polished a turd.
The internship thing is going good. not sure how long it will continue unfortunately due to them having a lack of projects to give me but we will see. I got to work on a few shots for the remake of Halo which was good fun and experience so no complaints there
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No, I wouldn't say it's a turd by any stretch of the imagination because there are some strong elements there. The head design is interesting and the arms also work pretty well. I think you need to lose the bottom half, beef up the torso area (to support the weight of the arms and that hammer thing), make the bottom half of the body look like it belongs with the arms and head and spin it to a 3/4 shot.
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ok ok... alright there are some good parts to it. Dunno if i will return to this right now though. other projects on the go and such
how is your course and prep for your trip coming? oh and any new job prospects?
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heh you could certainly try
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heh i think i could have made it more fluid, less front on... i dunno... maybe some useful joints etc...
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for some reason this reminds me of Dog from Half life 2
well done!
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heh yeah i can see how you could think that.
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