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Published: 2003-09-25 03:20:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 66; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Black and red, dusk and dawn
deep and dark, night has spawned

The moon rises up and expands
While many rest in a great dream land

Yet a child remains awake
Staring at a flowing lake

He wonders if the sun will return
Dying night, day reborn

The sun does rise; the moon goes away
Another dawn, another day

Deep and dark, the sun was gone
Red and black, dusk and dawn
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Comments: 3

Yamiyo-no-Kage [2003-09-25 03:31:29 +0000 UTC]

This is really good. I like the "great dream land" instead of just sleep. Keep it up

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shortstuff2k2k In reply to Yamiyo-no-Kage [2003-09-25 03:38:17 +0000 UTC]

You really think so?

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Yamiyo-no-Kage In reply to shortstuff2k2k [2003-09-25 04:13:30 +0000 UTC]

Yes, yes I do ^^

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