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Published: 2009-09-09 15:07:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 622; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Description Alright so this is very first real photomanipulation... I'd love to hear what you think of this because now so far I don't know where I'm at...

This picture is inspired by my beloved friend Ina's poem "Selfslaved Issues".

girl and background from
flower texture from
footsteps and barbie from sxc.hu
editing etc. : me


EDIT: now this is kinda the final version.
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Comments: 7

chaosbreak [2009-09-09 16:22:27 +0000 UTC]

I'd add a little bit more contrast to the front of the girl...

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silent-scream-throe In reply to chaosbreak [2009-09-09 19:14:17 +0000 UTC]

So I fixed the barbie now, she's a little lighter than the rest. Do you mean make the girl look a bit lighter and clearer? I think the dress looks a bit too dark in the front, too... Sheesh, she's unimproveable Anyways thank you really much for your comment

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chaosbreak In reply to silent-scream-throe [2009-09-09 19:20:28 +0000 UTC]

no problem, it's a really good job

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silent-scream-throe In reply to chaosbreak [2009-09-09 19:25:09 +0000 UTC]

aaww thank you

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PosyHaime [2009-09-09 15:10:58 +0000 UTC]

I'm no photo-manipulator so I can't really give you great advice, but I do think this is a very nice composition, it works well, but the girl doesn't quite look like she's there. Perhaps some shadowing would help with this.

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silent-scream-throe In reply to PosyHaime [2009-09-09 16:22:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you really much for telling me your opinion I edited it and now the girl and the barbie are a little darker so they don't shine out of the background so much anymore

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PosyHaime In reply to silent-scream-throe [2009-09-09 18:30:48 +0000 UTC]

no problem :] glad to be of some help

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