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HOKAY.

Thankyouthankyouthankyou to everyone who took the time to crit my last submission, I really appreciate it.

This is going to have to be the final for now, since it's due Friday and I know for a fact I won't have time to fix it up at all tomorrow. So! What I changed:

"Aired out" the trees a little so that they're not just blobs of green anymore. Hopefully they look a little more um. Tree-like now.
Tightened up the clouds around his back a little bit, I forgot to add highlights before. /swt
Some minor color adjustments on the beastie itself, darkened up some shadows.
Tweaked the shape of the front tree a bit (although I left the screaming-stick-man tree on the right because that's funny ; ) ).
Added grass! I'd say "foliage" but it was too tiny for me to really even try to get much detail down there. I'm afraid if I went in and tried to make actual individual plants, it would take away from his size.
Attached the trees on the far left and far right to Mr. Swampie.

I did delete the old version out of my gallery (sorry for those of you that faved it, but I get twitchy with two copies of the same picture in my gallery) but you can see it here if you so desire: [link]

Thanks again guys.

Description
HOKAY.

Thankyouthankyouthankyou to everyone who took the time to crit my last submission, I really appreciate it.

This is going to have to be the final for now, since it's due Friday and I know for a fact I won't have time to fix it up at all tomorrow. So! What I changed:

"Aired out" the trees a little so that they're not just blobs of green anymore. Hopefully they look a little more um. Tree-like now.
Tightened up the clouds around his back a little bit, I forgot to add highlights before. /swt
Some minor color adjustments on the beastie itself, darkened up some shadows.
Tweaked the shape of the front tree a bit (although I left the screaming-stick-man tree on the right because that's funny ; ) ).
Added grass! I'd say "foliage" but it was too tiny for me to really even try to get much detail down there. I'm afraid if I went in and tried to make actual individual plants, it would take away from his size.
Attached the trees on the far left and far right to Mr. Swampie.

I did delete the old version out of my gallery (sorry for those of you that faved it, but I get twitchy with two copies of the same picture in my gallery) but you can see it here if you so desire: [link]

Thanks again guys.