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Published: 2005-11-10 03:18:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 7719; Favourites: 232; Downloads: 1247
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Description HOKAY.

Thankyouthankyouthankyou to everyone who took the time to crit my last submission, I really appreciate it.

This is going to have to be the final for now, since it's due Friday and I know for a fact I won't have time to fix it up at all tomorrow. So! What I changed:

"Aired out" the trees a little so that they're not just blobs of green anymore. Hopefully they look a little more um. Tree-like now.
Tightened up the clouds around his back a little bit, I forgot to add highlights before. /swt
Some minor color adjustments on the beastie itself, darkened up some shadows.
Tweaked the shape of the front tree a bit (although I left the screaming-stick-man tree on the right because that's funny ; ) ).
Added grass! I'd say "foliage" but it was too tiny for me to really even try to get much detail down there. I'm afraid if I went in and tried to make actual individual plants, it would take away from his size.
Attached the trees on the far left and far right to Mr. Swampie.

I did delete the old version out of my gallery (sorry for those of you that faved it, but I get twitchy with two copies of the same picture in my gallery) but you can see it here if you so desire: [link]

Thanks again guys.
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Comments: 52

silentkitty In reply to ??? [2008-12-24 13:13:14 +0000 UTC]

I'm a bit late, but go ahead.

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Sythius In reply to silentkitty [2008-12-24 17:26:31 +0000 UTC]

Lol

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story [2008-04-03 02:07:42 +0000 UTC]

Great idea!

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Sandgoddess-Naomi [2007-07-11 03:56:13 +0000 UTC]

That's so beautiful! And very creative too.
I just love willows, especially big old ones! I can just see one of them being some sort of creature, or being.
This is wonderful. The birds living in it are a nice touch too.

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Nanhart [2006-12-30 23:12:34 +0000 UTC]

This creature is soooooooo cute! <3 <3 <3

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Rowbawtt [2006-11-19 01:16:14 +0000 UTC]

That's amazing. You should really do a tutorial on how you color things.

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crazytwinlex [2006-10-07 03:51:37 +0000 UTC]

I really like the way you did this piece! It's amazing! I almost mistook the beast for willow trees XD

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wenzmaster [2006-03-31 17:45:13 +0000 UTC]

AMAZING!

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helterskellter [2006-03-11 01:33:04 +0000 UTC]

Amazing! And so green!

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cqb [2006-01-26 05:22:33 +0000 UTC]

I can really imagine this being coming to life in a fantasy world. Disturbed by the presence of wandering adventurers and suprisingly curious about them instead of hostile.

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Shadow-Mouse244 [2006-01-25 18:23:30 +0000 UTC]

Wow. It's amazing. I want to be able to do stuff like that. ^-^ Good good good good job! And I love the colors. <3

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Rick-Eagle [2006-01-24 15:43:15 +0000 UTC]

Very beautifull, the colors, all in diferents tons of green.. it's harder to do... if you understand me...

Very awesome!

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Inc- [2006-01-24 03:12:14 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! I'm totally digging the lush greens/blues. The Mr. Swampie tree reminds me of a weeping willow (neatest tree ever!) Nice job.

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DrewGreen [2006-01-24 01:35:47 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous. It'd be a crime not to add to my favorites list. Great idea and interesting presentation of that idea. I love it!

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ChildofMotherGaia [2006-01-23 10:17:57 +0000 UTC]

looks beautiful, maybe one day i'll get to visit the swamp beast..

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nataszek [2006-01-23 09:47:12 +0000 UTC]

Great *0*
I see dragon's tree...beautiful....I must give you a Fav

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ChibiLeen [2006-01-23 09:31:05 +0000 UTC]

Really well done. ^^ I love the way the beast merges with the foliage of the willow. Beautiful colours, and great idea overall. ^^

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shijo [2006-01-14 20:43:28 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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Ieatfoodyay [2006-01-13 22:13:26 +0000 UTC]

does your amazingness have no bounderies!?

hehe

thats great!

compared to the other one

you did a wounderful job on the fix up~

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deadengel [2005-12-30 19:03:21 +0000 UTC]

wow very interestic work. I love the colors

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WonderDookie [2005-12-12 09:11:15 +0000 UTC]

This is sweet. I always like the idea of taking really fantastic beasts and making them somewhat plausible scientifically (like giving them novel camo). I like the mist coming off fo him like that, it makes him look more mystical, and also makes it look like he's been standing there still for quite a while, waiting for his prey.

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LatinMuffin [2005-12-03 22:00:53 +0000 UTC]

wow great drawing!!

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bambusesser [2005-11-23 21:45:13 +0000 UTC]

now that is style! great idea and grat painting

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p-nut [2005-11-16 11:47:56 +0000 UTC]

did ANYBODY else see a Squid like creature before seeing ( which took me a minute er 2) the actual head of the swamp beast??? (if u look to the top right , there a circle patch panting with a mist clouds strip over the center with a bird, er... dirt black spot in the middle of the green & strip)...its late morning so i see swamp squid people lol. Hun, it's a great piece. It feels fairy tale-ish & even feels like Neverending Story-ish er something....

A film by SilentKitty ....
"The Neverending Story pt 23" staring p-nut & squiddy (the swampbeast) & kids will love it, & it will be a creepy feel good movie of the year!
Yup, i'm tired.

:>

good work

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Estrada [2005-11-14 23:50:29 +0000 UTC]

really interesting painterly quality to this, i applaud the effort and the result!

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ShadowFireKitty [2005-11-14 18:59:49 +0000 UTC]

=^_^=Very awesome! The beast is amazin =o_O;= Just imagine walking into that in the swamp! Hehheh. Very good work on all the plant life, it looks pretty realistic, and very professional =^_^=

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gt-ranma [2005-11-14 10:40:30 +0000 UTC]

... holy sh*t silent O_o That's awsome! My god, how many classes have you been taking? God I wish I could do that *envy* ; ; That's so much cooler then drawing half nekid anime girls ; ; *sigh*

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gureiduson [2005-11-12 04:11:19 +0000 UTC]

WOOOOWWW! WOONNNDEEERRRFFFULLLL!!!!

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trappedillusions [2005-11-12 01:01:00 +0000 UTC]

This work reminds me alot of when i was in the philipines and brazil,, its great being somewhere with such a beautiful nature. It brought back memories, thanks = )

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SunSunich [2005-11-11 21:25:42 +0000 UTC]

That's one cute monster.
So greeny & so 'swampish'. You've done good!

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Baku-Nightmare [2005-11-11 13:45:22 +0000 UTC]

Yayyyyyy!!!!!! *0* OMFG!!! It's GREAT!!!

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emavalendo [2005-11-11 06:54:53 +0000 UTC]

Great One!

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splashley07 [2005-11-11 00:53:26 +0000 UTC]

WOAH!!! THAT IS...i wouldn't have seen him if the title didn't say beast...


that is so kewl o.o

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KathrynWhiteford [2005-11-10 22:33:19 +0000 UTC]

Wow! I love everything in this - the concept, the colours, the layout - but most of all the beasty himself!! It is just awesome in every way!

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SkippyJr [2005-11-10 21:43:25 +0000 UTC]

Nice colours,
Very good idea,
I really enjoyed this work.

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chris16 [2005-11-10 18:35:30 +0000 UTC]

wowww freekin sweet!!!

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jonathanvair [2005-11-10 16:54:01 +0000 UTC]

Lush!

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pukegreenshoes [2005-11-10 16:12:57 +0000 UTC]

you definitely improved it.go you!

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ivyc [2005-11-10 16:11:28 +0000 UTC]

I also see more definition in the clouds as well!! Nice job. I'm afraid I must have missed the previous piece. Hmm.

I love how lush and green everything is. How the monster seems to be rising up out of the muck and swampy water. I also like how he seems to have trees for legs... how very interesting, I like that he seems to be a part of the nature. VERY NICE IMAGE!!

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William--Kain [2005-11-10 15:12:40 +0000 UTC]

awesome, It's nice to see someone actualy take people's comments and suggestions and turn them into change. this looked great before and even better now.

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Riverglen [2005-11-10 15:03:18 +0000 UTC]

Even better!

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z3r0t0lerance [2005-11-10 12:53:08 +0000 UTC]

this is freakin' creepy! but really great idea!!

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z3r0t0lerance [2005-11-10 12:38:23 +0000 UTC]

this is freakin' creepy! but really great idea!!

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Reza-ilyasa [2005-11-10 10:59:18 +0000 UTC]

oh man thats really creepy!

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JamieLeeDesign [2005-11-10 07:43:01 +0000 UTC]

I would love to see the before one.. >_> just to compare, but this is awesome.

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silentkitty In reply to JamieLeeDesign [2005-11-10 15:12:43 +0000 UTC]

I linked to it in the description..

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JamieLeeDesign In reply to JamieLeeDesign [2005-11-10 07:52:23 +0000 UTC]

eep, sorry. I just saw the link for it. /swt

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silentkitty In reply to JamieLeeDesign [2005-11-10 15:13:25 +0000 UTC]

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AngelsChilde [2005-11-10 06:22:48 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe, that is awesome, and brilliantly done!!

Anna

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myra911 [2005-11-10 04:49:19 +0000 UTC]

I love this, I want this in print......really I do. I Liked it before the touch ups. I still like it *L*

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