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Published: 2008-07-21 04:30:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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I don't swim,but let's dive into uncharted waters anyway
(just because it's you).
Lead me on,
all flotation devices and safety,
while I'm sinking with your sweet friendship.
Be careful,
please realize that once submerged,
I don't want to come back up without you.
You're strange,
teaching me in your twisted way,
building me up with your talk of the ocean.
I can't breathe,
deep-sea diving wasn't for me,
and I'm low on air and losing more.
I didn't realize how deep we were,
but it's nicely suffocating here,
it's not good for me, but I love it.
Pull me out,
all cruel words and cold shoulder,
and I can almost break surface.
Switch gears,
please stop tearing me down,
I liked being with you, so deep and warm.
You're letting go,
leaving me to fend for my own,
and I'm buoyed here by confusion: unmoving.
I don't understand,
I there's nothing left to love,
and I'm still drowning for you.
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Comments: 8
Bahama-dreams [2008-07-23 21:01:34 +0000 UTC]
I love the metaphor of drowning as being a 'good' thing and breaking the surface to come up for air as bad. This is very good writing, sorry for your loss though....
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silversleet In reply to Bahama-dreams [2008-07-24 23:33:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank youu's~
And you don't need to be sorry at all, I never lost anything [you can't lose what you never had .-.]
xD Apparently, I got something out of it, if you say it's good, lol
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Bahama-dreams In reply to silversleet [2008-07-25 04:54:19 +0000 UTC]
I say it's good, yes I do. Reading it I could feel the loss, hence the condolence. It's fresh, new.
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lilpastshadow [2008-07-22 18:50:47 +0000 UTC]
i like it, this is very touching for me. it describes how i feel, and knowing someone else is the same way....well...anyway, i thank you for writing this.
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silversleet In reply to lilpastshadow [2008-07-23 16:19:33 +0000 UTC]
I'm really glad you liked it, and I'm sorry to hear that you've had to go through the same.. stuff. D:< But we can team up and get through this together, yeah?
Anyway, thanks for reading~
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lilpastshadow In reply to silversleet [2008-07-23 19:42:44 +0000 UTC]
how couldn't i? yeah, we can support each other. im curious though, how old are you? and thanks for your concern, it's appreciated.
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silversleet In reply to lilpastshadow [2008-07-24 23:35:59 +0000 UTC]
xD Ahaha, I'm only fourteen. You?
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