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Published: 2008-04-25 17:39:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 74; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description Tell me what's going on.
Why's everything going by
at lightning speed,
flashing a fast burst of light,
and leaving,
but going so slow?

Tell me what's wrong with me.
Why can't I just sit down
be a bit more levelheaded,
and say those words,
the things I want to say,
but refrain from going overboard?

Tell me who you think I am.
Why can't I describe me
with all those parts of me,
in a way that makes sense,
not like the fractured parts of me,
but as a whole picture?

Tell me who I should be.
Why do I feel so at a loss
when I think of the future,
like it's a huge, wide ocean,
just waiting to swallow me up,
and try to submerge successful?

Tell me everything.
Why can't I find the answers
to all these questions in my head,
ones that makes no sense,
ones that confuse me,
confuse me like the way I feel about you?
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Comments: 3

chocklatefreak [2008-06-27 00:51:56 +0000 UTC]

pretty. small suggestion: title could be "tell me"

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silversleet In reply to chocklatefreak [2008-06-27 03:00:28 +0000 UTC]

I really do want to know why you're looking at my older stuff... I really was considering that title, but I was trying to use something that wasn't in the poem, y'know? o.O Sort of like how Panic! At The Disco gives their songs such odd titles that are never said in the lyrics? Yahhh.

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chocklatefreak In reply to silversleet [2008-07-09 04:07:36 +0000 UTC]

ooh i see *nods* ^^

buena idea!

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