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Published: 2004-03-10 05:01:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 70; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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Description Alone
Drawing circles in the dark
With my insignificant fingers
On the neverending wall.

So small
In this world of immense fear.
They look past my feelings
And see only the skin.

The people
Stare in through the bars
And leer at my inferiority
Through the strong, menacing iron

Tiny
In this flood of hopelessness.
Drowning in the enveloping anger
That emmits from them all.

They watch
Every single move I make,
Judging my nothingness,
This slicing cold draws me in.
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Comments: 5

ProfoundDesolation [2004-03-11 01:22:56 +0000 UTC]

I love this...it sounds just like me. great job!

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simple-serendipity In reply to ProfoundDesolation [2004-03-11 05:48:03 +0000 UTC]

LoL.....thanks.

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Psyco-in-a-box [2004-03-10 05:31:12 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could say the meaning was crystal clear to me. but it really isn't.:-P it IS a good poem though. nice job karlee

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simple-serendipity In reply to Psyco-in-a-box [2004-03-10 05:32:58 +0000 UTC]

it's not crystal clear to me either. LoL. It's just kind of....a picture that was in my head I guess, and it didn't really make sense.

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Psyco-in-a-box In reply to simple-serendipity [2004-03-10 05:36:37 +0000 UTC]

lol, nah, its not that, its just that I'm a bit slow upstairs. its a nice job none the less

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