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Published: 2013-07-28 02:44:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 837; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Description I know I said I was gonna stop making these... but who am I kidding? I'm making this one kinda different, in that it's a different setting for each player. I'm borrowing the idea from , soo yeah. Enjoy! ^^
Update: CLOSED! I WILL NOT START ANY MORE RPS ON THIS!
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SinzutheGreat In reply to ??? [2013-07-28 18:50:00 +0000 UTC]

Back on the hangar, something crawls out of the shuttle.

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SomemuttupNorth In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-28 20:18:59 +0000 UTC]

Several hours later, a mechanic is trying to fix the shuttle, grumbling to himself while soft Hawaiian music plays in the background.


"Would you believe this? Β Thrusters completely shot over here, and the front's gotta be all replaced... they don't pay me enough for this."


Something clatters behind the shuttle. Β He looks up. "Frank, if that's you trying to scare me again, you gotta watch your-"


--


On the bridge, that same moment: Β "Captain, we lost Tanner's signal."


"What do you mean?"


"His vitals are gone."


"Shit. Suit malfunctioning?"


"Negative, but I'm reading massive damage and... camera image coming up."


"Put it on the screen."

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SinzutheGreat In reply to SomemuttupNorth [2013-07-28 20:23:08 +0000 UTC]

There is some kind of creature, about a foot tall, with six arms and six legs, each with four razor sharp claws. It has pitch black scales and three giant red eyes. Two antennae are poking out of it's head next to a pair of horns. It's consuming Tanner's internal organs.

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SomemuttupNorth In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-28 21:11:31 +0000 UTC]

Alarms trigger throughout the ship.


"Larson, lockdown mode, now! Blow the hangar!"


"But, sir-"


"NOW, DAMMIT!!"


"Yes, sir. Emergency decompression of hangar, commencing!"


The camera cuts for a moment, before debris gets sucked past as the hangar doors blow off. Β The suit camera lifts away from the corpse and flies into space, before the signal goes out of range.Β 


"... Did we get it?"

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SinzutheGreat In reply to SomemuttupNorth [2013-07-28 21:26:23 +0000 UTC]

I guess there's only one way to know.

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SomemuttupNorth In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-29 03:55:29 +0000 UTC]

"... Anything?"


"We lost all sensor and cameras when the hangar blew. Β I've got no way to check, except manual entry-"


"No. Β Not an option. Β Post a guard by the hatch at all times, keep the ship under partial lockdown. We've still got a job to do."


I sigh, and pinch the bridge of my nose. Β "... I'll be in my quarters."



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SinzutheGreat In reply to SomemuttupNorth [2013-07-29 04:00:57 +0000 UTC]

Some time passes and Larson calls your radio.

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SomemuttupNorth In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-29 04:18:33 +0000 UTC]

"Ugh..." I murmur as I get back up. Β "Larson, what time is it?"


"0400 Zulu time, Cap."


"Damn, how long was I out?"


"About 14 hours... we've reached premium tow speed, should reach Mars in a week... but, something's come up."


"What is it?"


"... The last guard heard movement behind the hangar hatch."

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SinzutheGreat In reply to SomemuttupNorth [2013-07-29 04:22:56 +0000 UTC]

We both know what's coming.

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SomemuttupNorth In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-29 04:37:38 +0000 UTC]

I'm already running by the time he finishes saying that. Β I barely make it to the bridge before the ship shudders and alarms go off.


"Hull breach, hull breach! The hatch to the hangar just blew, we're venting atmosphere!"


"Everyone, configure suits to environment!"


Our flight suits, fortunately, have automatic helmets that pop up in the event of decompression. "How do we look, Larson?"


"Atmosphere draining fast, at 40%. I've lost Locke's transponder, he was on guard, and we have movement."


"What?"


"That thing we saw? It's on board, and heading this way."

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SinzutheGreat In reply to SomemuttupNorth [2013-07-29 14:18:23 +0000 UTC]

Get ready. It's almost here.

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SomemuttupNorth In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-29 18:17:35 +0000 UTC]

We can feel the shudders as the thing tears its way through the ship.Β 


"... Did anyone alert Doc?"


"I'm still in med bay you bastards... that thing went past heading for you."


I turn around. "... Okay. New plan, fall back to the Argo. Β Doc? Head out the back and meet us there. If the hangar's not still open, the breach in the hull will work too."


Larson looks confused. "But sir, how..."


I grab a rifle and aim at the cockpit windows.

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SinzutheGreat In reply to SomemuttupNorth [2013-07-29 18:50:11 +0000 UTC]

You know, this RP sounds like a horror flick. Anyways, back to the point. This is gonna be good.

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SomemuttupNorth In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-29 19:26:06 +0000 UTC]

(I kinda leaned heavily on Dead SpaceΒ when I thought this up, but it sounds like that would work too)


"Wait for it... all suits, prepare for decompression..."


Something starts to tear at the hatch, and I fire a burst through the glass. Β Everyone is sucked out of the ship. In dead silence, we use the force of air to cross the distance to the Argo, and get on through the hole in her side. Β We reach an airlock and recompress. Β "Everyone still with us? Doc?"


"I found the hangar, I'll be there in a sec."

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SinzutheGreat In reply to SomemuttupNorth [2013-07-29 20:10:29 +0000 UTC]

Never played Dead Space...

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SomemuttupNorth In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-29 21:13:45 +0000 UTC]

Me neither ^^

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SinzutheGreat In reply to SomemuttupNorth [2013-07-29 21:44:40 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Edvyle-The-Grovyle In reply to ??? [2013-07-28 03:39:23 +0000 UTC]

Sci-Fi!

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SinzutheGreat In reply to Edvyle-The-Grovyle [2013-07-28 03:43:15 +0000 UTC]

Very well. Physical description?

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Edvyle-The-Grovyle In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-28 03:50:31 +0000 UTC]

Actually....


I am a person in this combat space suit. Mid-30's. Armed with a MC-31 Assault Rifle (Made it up :>). Commander of the S.E.A. Corps

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SinzutheGreat In reply to Edvyle-The-Grovyle [2013-07-28 03:51:35 +0000 UTC]

Ah, a space cop!

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Edvyle-The-Grovyle In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-28 03:53:14 +0000 UTC]

HEY YOU, COME BACK HERE!

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SinzutheGreat In reply to Edvyle-The-Grovyle [2013-07-28 03:53:48 +0000 UTC]

Lol, what?

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Edvyle-The-Grovyle In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-28 03:58:15 +0000 UTC]

I thought it started already XD. You were sayng the last comment like you were a criminal or something

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SinzutheGreat In reply to Edvyle-The-Grovyle [2013-07-28 04:00:20 +0000 UTC]

What? No, I'm just an aid from beyond the fourth wall.

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Edvyle-The-Grovyle In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-28 04:01:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh XD

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SinzutheGreat In reply to Edvyle-The-Grovyle [2013-07-28 04:12:01 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Edvyle-The-Grovyle In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-28 03:48:50 +0000 UTC]

ehhhh...why?

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Theoneyoubetrayed In reply to ??? [2013-07-28 03:30:06 +0000 UTC]

*Realistic*

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SinzutheGreat In reply to Theoneyoubetrayed [2013-07-28 03:30:53 +0000 UTC]

Okay. Physical description and setting, please.

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Theoneyoubetrayed In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-28 03:35:06 +0000 UTC]

I'm a man wearing a grey suit, brown pants, and tie.


Standing in a grave yard.

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SinzutheGreat In reply to Theoneyoubetrayed [2013-07-28 03:40:15 +0000 UTC]

I see. And why exactly are you there?

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Theoneyoubetrayed In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-28 03:44:34 +0000 UTC]

I'm standing over a hole. Thinking about who was here.

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SinzutheGreat In reply to Theoneyoubetrayed [2013-07-28 03:48:36 +0000 UTC]

I see. Okay. An old man approaches you. "Did you know that one?"

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Theoneyoubetrayed In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-28 03:51:14 +0000 UTC]

I turn and look at him then back at the hole.

" I might."

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SinzutheGreat In reply to Theoneyoubetrayed [2013-07-28 03:52:38 +0000 UTC]

"Okay, I won't pry." He turns and leaves.

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Theoneyoubetrayed In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-28 03:54:58 +0000 UTC]

I reach in myΒ pocketΒ and turn around.

"Hey, Pal!"

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SinzutheGreat In reply to Theoneyoubetrayed [2013-07-28 03:58:07 +0000 UTC]

"Yeah?"

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Theoneyoubetrayed In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-28 04:00:37 +0000 UTC]

"How about a smoke?"

I pull out a pack of cigars.

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SinzutheGreat In reply to Theoneyoubetrayed [2013-07-28 04:11:55 +0000 UTC]

"No thank you. These old bones have had enough for one life. But thanks for offering, son."

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Theoneyoubetrayed In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-28 04:14:57 +0000 UTC]

I pull one out and put it in my mouth.

"I'm a detective."

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SinzutheGreat In reply to Theoneyoubetrayed [2013-07-28 04:19:52 +0000 UTC]

"Heheheh, well, son, I hear that's a dangerous business. Be careful out there."

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Theoneyoubetrayed In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-28 04:21:36 +0000 UTC]

"Was this hole always here?"

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SinzutheGreat In reply to Theoneyoubetrayed [2013-07-28 04:25:12 +0000 UTC]

"I dunno. I was just visiting my wife here."

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Theoneyoubetrayed In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-28 04:26:17 +0000 UTC]

"How long?"

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SinzutheGreat In reply to Theoneyoubetrayed [2013-07-28 04:29:13 +0000 UTC]

"She caught something 'bout fifteen years back." He's on the verge if tears. "She's up in the clouds now."

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Theoneyoubetrayed In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-28 04:31:32 +0000 UTC]

I look down at the ground.

"My mother died ofΒ EbolaΒ about that time."

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SinzutheGreat In reply to Theoneyoubetrayed [2013-07-28 04:36:05 +0000 UTC]

He's silent for a minute.

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Theoneyoubetrayed In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-07-28 04:39:38 +0000 UTC]

I look back at the hole.

"I think that this grave was robed."

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SinzutheGreat In reply to Theoneyoubetrayed [2013-07-28 04:42:14 +0000 UTC]

"It was?"

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