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Sirilu — DeathNote: Undercover Part II
Published: 2010-04-21 19:41:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 4485; Favourites: 120; Downloads: 17
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More from your new favorite TV series!
Can you tell how much Raye Penber annoyed me in the original work…? 
And omg, women! In my DeathNote fancomic!
Not one, but two! I think we have a record. Just don’t hold your breath for more…^^There is a third part planned. =3
L and the gang @ Tsugumi Ohba and Obata-sensei
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Nice to see some ladies in a Deathnote fancomic! Lol, I like your Raye a lot better than the original version...
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Thanks ^__^ He did need some improvement badly...
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Win.
Thank you.
Raye Penber's painful death made me very happy, though now i think i prefer this ending. ^.^
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Welcome ^^
I know. I wasn't too thrilled with the way Light was working, but I didn't feel any pity for Raye either. After stating so clearly that he was stupid, it was a given he wouldn't survive long against Kira. =3
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XDDD I just hated his "make me a sammich wuman!" attitude =-=
i liked Light in the begining...
Then he went insane and i was like =_= oh u suk
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Thank you for making Raye Naomi's bitch. That's the best thing ever!
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Awesome. Raye Penber belongs in the kitchen.
xD These drawings you have here are so carefree and charming. They're fun to look at. <3
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"L and Kira walk into a bar... (read full joke in Pag" 
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That engagement comic is like the cutest thing in awhile! <3 It made me happy and all smiling~ <3
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Thank you
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That's right, Raye... you bitch. Make your lady a sammich!
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