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Ski-Machine — Intimidation

Published: 2011-02-22 03:19:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 2083; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 0
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Description “I got the supplies Mitch, all you need is a saddle and some riding gear, there’s one in the back but it may be a little pricey.” Bo cautioned.
“If it’s a saddle I’ll take it, I’ve got about seventy dollars saved up.” Mitch headed towards the back and spotted the saddle resting over a sawhorse. It was made from dark leather and looked more expensive than his previous one; Mitch knew he also needed to buy saddle bags, a saddle blanket, and a bridle. He wasn’t sure how far his savings would stretch.
He rested a hand on the saddle as he tried to estimate how much it would cost when a deep voice startled him.
“Never expected to see you back here.”
Mitch turned and saw the burly form of Mr. Brown, a large-built tawny mouse with his sleeves rolled up showing beefy forearms. His girth could be seen on either side of his white clerk’s apron tied in a small bow behind him. His whiskers were fashioned into a short but bushy mustache, which he twitched as he looked down at him.
“Mr. Brown, sir.” Mitch took off his hat respectfully. “Yes, it has been a while.” He felt his insides squirming, this man was one of the main reasons he had been avoiding Redcliff.
“Almost a year it would seem.” Mr. Brown said gruffly and patted the saddle without moving his eyes from Mitch’s face. “What’s your business this side of town?”
“I need a new saddle, sir, my brother… was kidnapped. The boys and I are going after them. Er, could I get a price on that one?” he asked touching to dark saddle that Mr. Brown was leaning against.
“Hmm, I see, someone you love, taken away, but this time, you’re going after them.” Mr. Brown seemed to ignore the question of the price and Mitch seemed to wince at his words.
“Please, sir, you must understand, it’s not like that…” he tried to explain.
“Not like what, I suppose my daughter never meant that much to you otherwise you’d have gone after her as well.” Mr. Brown’s eye bored into him and Mitch’s ears flattened feeling old wounds start to reopen at the mention of Mr. Brown’s daughter.
“I…” Mitch backed up a little but his legs felt like stone. He didn’t know what to say, his heart started to pound and more guilt made his chest tighten. Luckily, Bo seemed to sense Mitch’s awkwardness and hurried over, smiling broadly.
“Mr. Brown! Fancy seeing you here! Well, of course, it is your store I suppose. We’re headin’ off on a little trail ridin’ and Mitch here’s lost his saddle in a fire, how much is that dandy looking one under your arm?”


This took a long time to draw! Had it as a sketch for several days, then penned it over two nights and colored it over another three.

Poor Mitch and his ex-future father in law
At least Bo is a good friend to help him out.

Skytown is Copyright 2004-2011 to Christine Ridgway
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Comments: 35

moSHypants [2011-02-23 01:01:28 +0000 UTC]

POOR MITCHY!!!! How could Mr. Brown doooo that!!!!

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Ski-Machine In reply to moSHypants [2011-02-23 01:11:11 +0000 UTC]

I know! 'Cause Mr. Brown blames Mitch for his daughter's desertion and blames him for not going after her the meany

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moSHypants In reply to Ski-Machine [2011-02-23 01:13:47 +0000 UTC]

BUUUUTTHEAD!

ANYWAYS. THis totally rocks. Mitchy's expression owns and the background looks amazing It looks like it would take a lot of time! Just like you said it did I GIVE YOU an A+++++++++++

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Ski-Machine In reply to moSHypants [2011-02-23 01:19:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
Yus, he's mean but he's also a moody and crotchety father who dosn't understand his angel of a daughter is really a backstabbing floozy

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moSHypants In reply to Ski-Machine [2011-02-23 01:20:32 +0000 UTC]

UNDERSTAND DANGIT!!!

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Ski-Machine In reply to moSHypants [2011-02-23 01:28:44 +0000 UTC]

haha nooo he'd rather stomp Mitch into the dust

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moSHypants In reply to Ski-Machine [2011-02-24 23:47:21 +0000 UTC]

NOES!!

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Ski-Machine In reply to moSHypants [2011-02-25 00:35:25 +0000 UTC]

Yeah Poor babykins. The worst part is Mitch feels so guilty he starts to belive him

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moSHypants In reply to Ski-Machine [2011-02-25 00:43:13 +0000 UTC]

NO MITCH DUN DO EET!!!!

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Ski-Machine In reply to moSHypants [2011-02-25 00:48:30 +0000 UTC]

Yeah Then Bo's got to drag him out of Mr. Brown's guilt trap and remind him who left who.

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moSHypants In reply to Ski-Machine [2011-02-25 00:52:17 +0000 UTC]

SHE LEFT YOU! YOU DIDN"T LEEF HER!! YOU ROCK MITCH

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Ski-Machine In reply to moSHypants [2011-02-25 00:53:54 +0000 UTC]

haha Bo's pep-talk in a nutshell hahaha
Poor Guy His life gets infinately better after a few more hardships

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moSHypants In reply to Ski-Machine [2011-02-25 00:56:53 +0000 UTC]

Yay Happy Mitch

haha I can see it too Oh Bo. How I luff you so! Short and to the point.

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Ski-Machine In reply to moSHypants [2011-02-25 00:58:15 +0000 UTC]

yay!

haha I love Bo like a fat kid loves cake he's such a goof

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moSHypants In reply to Ski-Machine [2011-02-25 01:02:59 +0000 UTC]

GOOFY MEN ROCK. I luff the breakfast scene snippet. First he steals the burnt flapjacks and the next thing you know he's into the syrup

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Ski-Machine In reply to moSHypants [2011-02-25 01:04:52 +0000 UTC]

Haha despite his goofiness Bo is a really hard worker and pretty much Mitch's best friend besides Scott
Anf yus, he likey the syrup and pretty much any odd food combination... toast in coffee

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moSHypants In reply to Ski-Machine [2011-02-25 01:06:21 +0000 UTC]

does he eat his cereal in water instead of milk ??? Ewww that sounds really gross

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Ski-Machine In reply to moSHypants [2011-02-25 01:07:50 +0000 UTC]

haha naw no cereal, but he did put jam in his coffee

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moSHypants In reply to Ski-Machine [2011-02-25 01:10:09 +0000 UTC]

eewwwww BO! That's gross!! Now though... I oddly wanna try eet...
I bet Jacey would try it... probably wouldn't like it XD

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Ski-Machine In reply to moSHypants [2011-02-25 01:12:38 +0000 UTC]

Haha or was it his oatmeal? Bo has a bizarre sense of taste... Silly guy
Bo and Jacey would probably get along

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moSHypants In reply to Ski-Machine [2011-02-25 01:22:52 +0000 UTC]

I think they would too

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Ski-Machine In reply to moSHypants [2011-02-25 01:25:43 +0000 UTC]

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Foeseeker-warrior [2011-02-22 15:23:47 +0000 UTC]

I dun know why, but I like Mitch. A lot. Maybe it's because I'm the oldest in my family and I sorta understand the romance thing (not that I've ever been involved XP).

Great picture! Go on, Mitch, buck up and talk back!

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Ski-Machine In reply to Foeseeker-warrior [2011-02-22 18:45:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I love him too, I'm also the oldest. I just wanna squeeze him
Thanks haha Bo'll have to pull his string and get him talking.

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SerpentineDoves [2011-02-22 14:22:10 +0000 UTC]

poor guy!

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Ski-Machine In reply to SerpentineDoves [2011-02-22 18:45:23 +0000 UTC]

Yeah

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MunchyPaws [2011-02-22 13:17:39 +0000 UTC]

Very good literation!!

You have any more segments/future parts to go along with this? : )

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Ski-Machine In reply to MunchyPaws [2011-02-22 18:46:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
And yes, this is just a very small piece of the actual novel I'm writing and I'll continue to do little pieces that don't give too much of the story or spoilers away. Hopefully the book-book is finished by this summer and ready to go

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MunchyPaws In reply to Ski-Machine [2011-02-22 18:49:39 +0000 UTC]

Sweeeeeeeeet
Hope to hear more about it later on

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Ski-Machine In reply to MunchyPaws [2011-02-22 18:57:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks haha you will

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crf450r9 [2011-02-22 03:23:54 +0000 UTC]

Awwwe poor Mitch!! Stupid Mr. Brown, dissing Mitch for his own poopy daughter's decisions! ):< CHARLOTTE IS A LIFE RUINER!! Awes, I love Bo more and more every day He's such a nice mouse

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Ski-Machine In reply to crf450r9 [2011-02-22 03:26:32 +0000 UTC]

Haha yeah, you ever wonder why Mitch dosn't go into town, there's your reason
SHE IIIIISSSS!
Hehehe I love Bo so much, I love what he says next too haha I didn't want to post too much though

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crf450r9 In reply to Ski-Machine [2011-02-22 03:33:14 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwe Poor Mitch June needs to be arrivin' velly soonly!
EVIL CHEATING BUM!! ):<
Hahaha, I can't wait to read the story in full!

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Ski-Machine In reply to crf450r9 [2011-02-22 03:37:41 +0000 UTC]

haha I've gotten to her in the book!
YUS! >

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crf450r9 In reply to Ski-Machine [2011-02-22 04:08:27 +0000 UTC]

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAAAAAY JUNE!!!

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