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Published: 2004-12-11 02:25:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 103; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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What we have beenIs what we are,
How our lives had been seen
Mostly end up as a war.
For the beauty of our lives
And the beauty of our minds,
Always found in others eyes,
One day death they will find.
With all the possible reluctance
Cannot get away from death,
And in its deep power will dance
Into the earth profound depth.
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Comments: 5
minaka [2006-03-08 01:21:57 +0000 UTC]
and you said you couldn't write a poem for english... psh. this is really good.
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sksyong In reply to minaka [2006-03-09 00:04:48 +0000 UTC]
lol... yea, I can write poems for myself, not so much for others. Did that make sense?
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Pharia [2004-12-11 04:24:15 +0000 UTC]
yeah, it's really dark but it sound great for the first "serious" poem you wrote
keep up the good work!!!!
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sksyong In reply to Pharia [2004-12-12 05:40:31 +0000 UTC]
Thanx, more depressing, dark poems coming up... hahahah
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Pharia In reply to sksyong [2004-12-12 07:09:52 +0000 UTC]
oh boy we are in trouble!!
that's ok, as long as they are as nice.
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