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Smiling-Zil — WIP.2: CRIT PLZ? D:
Published: 2007-03-15 00:01:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 102; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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1st WIP: [link]YAY THEY HAVE Clothes! xD
umm hands are a bitch.. anyone have any tricks to help?
And crits on anatomy again plz.. or clothing wrinkles and folds.. xD whatever.. Just help me! DX
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I'd concentrate on their eyes - some of them have one eye set higher than another - or eyes set to close. And I have to agree with Meihua about giving the girls more shape x) They look very "straight" right now and girls aren't straight! Keep the hourglass figure in mind - maybe draw a circle around her thigh area to help you figure out the curve?
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The females' chests are too wide, it looks more like a chest of a male. As well as their legs. The thighs on the 4th, 5th and 9th are a bit too large since they have a skinny torso; the 4th person's arms are uneven and one looks more muscular that the other. The hair of the 3rd, 4th and 5th are too flat and makes them look more like a guy. The 6th's person eye is too large and too close to her nose and maybe her neck is alittle too thick. Her chest is too low and her shoulders are too downwards. The 1st person's shoulders are too downwards and the neck is alittle too thick.
Other than that, I really like the 7th person. x3 You did a good job on her, and the 2nd. I can't draw a larger person for shizzle. xD
For hands, I really just start with a box-shape. The fingers start off as just lines. It's hard for me to explain, sorry. xD;
Oi, sorry that was so long. o-o;
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Well, the hands look okay, but I think you need to practice torsos and legs a bit more. Just the angles are odd and don't quite fit.
Besides that, its a great job so far.
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Some of the heads and the hairs, in my opinion, doesn't make sense. Like, especially the girl with glasses. She got flat hair, but a rounder face.
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o.o which one are you talking about? *none of the girls wear glasses* (well I do, but not here! XD)
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Oh, the fourth from the last.
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The one with curly hair? (that's me.. xD) or wait.. flat hair.. Laura.. with her hands in the air (waving them around like she just don't car? XD)
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Niiice, Ani! Some of the arm positions look a little odd, though.
I couldn't draw a human ON YOUR LIFE. e_e
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yeah. they're dancing, so i didn't want them looking too stiff.. xD but Laura's arms look weird... and her mom look too stiff.. DX
on MY life?
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Nono, I meant 'my life.' xD Sooreh!
Haha, I like all the action. Now I wanna draw all my freinds. xD
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there really good i think but their eyes are a bit uneven
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Which ones look off to you?
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the third and fourth people do but im not completely sure scince i dont draw humans often
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Mkays~ I'll try to fix that.. which ones look uneven to you?
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from the left, 1 and 3..
4 and 5 have their eyes too close to their noses
also, I still think the girls' hips should be wider
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ok i think i fixed the eyes, but i can't get the hip right without them looking akward while they dance.. =/ it looks like they have lumps on their sides! DX
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hourglass figure? It shouldn't look like random lumps, it should all be smooth
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yeah.. i know the whole hourglass figure, but grr *frustrated* it's just not looking right!
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try drawing the thighs of the girls as long ovals that are thicker on one end
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i think for some reason i'm making them too low.. >.>
I don't think i've ever had this much trouble with hips before.. or maybe i never cared about them as much.. XD i just don't want this picture looking messed up.. Dx
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*sighs* ok.. maybe tomorrow though.. I should "let it cool" as my English teacher says. ;D
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*sighs* ok.. maybe tomorrow though.. I should "let it cool" as my English teacher says. ;D
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