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EDIT I had to change the file, the previous was hugemoar monsters from MnM RP, they are all official
but let me say some crap about each one
*cough*
1. WHAT THE FUCK?! IT'S A HUMAN, GET IN THE CAR!!
2.Following Bot, same model as Doci but in more gothy version.
3.Acid Wisp, I like making different kind of wisps, this one was pretty much a rip off from this [link] lol that's a gaia item btw
4.omg what I have done? [link]
5.YEY CUTE MECHA
6.KKK KK? I'm not racist, not at all
7.Shit twins monster or something, inspired by teratogenesis creatures I was seeing in a creepy site
8.Gas Ditto I shall call this, it copies appearence and stuff etc etc
9.This shit needs some love ;u; or at least needs something to eat...
10.[link]
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Critiques open
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changed file again, for size things etc
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Comments: 25
greenzaku [2009-10-21 13:02:54 +0000 UTC]
Overall
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Originality
Technique
Impact
As a roleplaying resource, your MnM guides are generally very clearly laid out and detailed, and this one is no exception. Although some monsters are inspired by other sources, I like the fact that you have added original touches to them (like having two tails on the Sea Siran instead of the stereotypical single tail) in addition to making highly original monsters of your own.
In terms of overall presentation, I like how you have arranged the smallest monsters near the human figure for scale. This is a simple, practical move that makes comparison easier. However I feel that more information on each monster could be provided in the text. We now know what an Undead Heli is, but we still don't see what a Heli is (as a live animal).
I notice you have an interesting artistic trend of having the legs of some animals and monsters end in spikes. I'm not sure if this indicates that those limbs can be used as weapons, or if its just a unique aspect of the biology of some species in the roleplay setting.
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Snook-8 In reply to greenzaku [2009-10-21 13:59:14 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for everything.I really appreciate the fact that you wrote a critique for this.
I do know that I should give more information about every monster but since the rp belongs to another person too I'm unable to make any info official without having been approved first. ^^
And that's why I prefer to just let people imagine the info about each one of them
I'm glad that you found the comparison thing interesting, and as about the legs, you can say that I just find them creepier with weird legs like those XD
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greenzaku In reply to Snook-8 [2009-10-21 14:23:05 +0000 UTC]
Ah I see...didn't take that into acocunt at first.
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StUkDaVoNs [2009-10-19 17:29:58 +0000 UTC]
I think octobot is a fusion of big daddies and slicer (from bioshock) and a little bit of tenticle rape
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summend [2009-10-18 17:30:41 +0000 UTC]
For some reason, I think the keewee's very cute. XDD
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TotenVeloren [2009-10-18 04:26:45 +0000 UTC]
XDDD FFFF this is fucking awesome as I said before. Your rendering skills are over 9000. I wonder if these monsters can be kept as pets.. I HAVE MY EYE ON THE SIREN FOR OBVIOUS REASONS.
AND KLUS CAN EAT ALL OF MORO'S 'DARK' ENEMIES
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Snook-8 In reply to TotenVeloren [2009-10-18 08:06:11 +0000 UTC]
HAHAHAHHAH
I DUNNO, THEY ARE WILD MONSTERZZZ BUT IF YOU HAVE OVER 9000 SKILLZ IN RPING YOU MIGHT MAKE THEM PETS...you smart granny..I want to the siren one too >8D
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PracticalAl [2009-10-17 22:37:51 +0000 UTC]
These designs are all phenomenal! Your use of texture is perfect! I love all the intricate detail. The Starbucks inspired one is genius.
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Snook-8 In reply to PracticalAl [2009-10-18 08:00:54 +0000 UTC]
^U^
thank you so much darlin'!!
I'm glad you like the starbucks one too XDD haha
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charmainemorganphoto [2009-10-13 23:13:08 +0000 UTC]
Amazing concepts! Definaly suited for a horror survival fps! XD
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Oh-Mrs-O [2009-10-13 19:47:43 +0000 UTC]
Omg human! What a bizarre concept!
No seriously. All of it. Awesome.
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Mortiferi [2009-10-13 17:19:07 +0000 UTC]
someone who met one of them, can't complain about a boredom. < <
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Spieluhr-13 [2009-10-13 16:57:38 +0000 UTC]
Woaaah those are all epic.
Now I really want an octobot! Well that one and a klus please xD
The only thing that is kinda ood to me is the wolf/dog/bear head? Maybe it's a tad flat or I'm not seeing it right >_<
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Snook-8 In reply to Spieluhr-13 [2009-10-13 18:42:02 +0000 UTC]
*gives you an octobot and a klus*
XDD I'm glad you liked them
hah you mean the Duo one, to be honest not even I know what this shit is XDDDD it mostly looks like a dog to me
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Spieluhr-13 In reply to Snook-8 [2009-10-14 14:44:52 +0000 UTC]
Yaaaay~ thank you sweetheart I'll take good care of them xD!
Well maybe you should use a bigger head? Then again it's YOUR creation, so who am I to talk xD.
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xXxKoTxXx [2009-10-13 16:00:45 +0000 UTC]
gamato idika to Acid Wisp kai to Octobot.Kai signomi to Sea siren miazi me to logo tou Starbuks?
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Snook-8 In reply to xXxKoTxXx [2009-10-13 18:37:29 +0000 UTC]
thanks vre!
ki nai X'D prose3e to logotupo tou starbucks einai mia gorgona me duo oures, e ki i siren gorgona me duo oures einai alla liiiiigo pio asximi XDD
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greenzaku [2009-10-13 13:12:09 +0000 UTC]
The Undead Heli reminds me of........................................................
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greenzaku In reply to Snook-8 [2009-10-14 01:01:03 +0000 UTC]
An evil, undead blue llama with its guts trailing on the ground.
Yup. XD
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ren128 [2009-10-13 12:57:54 +0000 UTC]
BITSCHLAP FOR VAG-SHOWING MERMAID!
awesome. all of them *u*
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Snook-8 In reply to ren128 [2009-10-13 13:00:20 +0000 UTC]
That's my job to do
XDD thank you
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