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You see that girl you just bullied?
The one you harassed over her choice of art?
The art of a man beating a woman to death?
She saw her father kill her mother when she was five.

You know that man who likes to photograph himself in dresses?
The one you called a homo because of his choice of clothing?
Well, his parents wanted him to be a girl instead of a boy.
So they made him dress like that everyday to pretend he was a girl.

You know that woman who writes stories about child rape?
The one you bullied until she didn’t know how to cope with life anymore
Her uncle has been in jail for the past eleven years.
He raped her daily for seven years of her life.

What about that guy who favored abstract artwork?
Do you remember him he liked to use the colors red and black a lot.
He was nearly beaten to death when he was fourteen.
He only knows nightmares because he remembers seeing his blood on the wall.

What about me? Do you remember me? Even just a teensy little bit?
You bullied me because you thought I used a fictional character in the wrong way.
Well, I’ve been beaten, sexually harassed, and neglected by my family.
Do you think its a coincidence that I had the same things happen to the character I wrote about?…



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Springfallendeer In reply to ??? [2014-04-12 20:35:59 +0000 UTC]

You have 6 days to complete it.

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planeta99 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-12 21:01:41 +0000 UTC]

yes capitan!

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Springfallendeer In reply to planeta99 [2014-04-12 21:14:08 +0000 UTC]

*Salutes you* Good lieutenant!

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planeta99 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-13 08:42:02 +0000 UTC]

   

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Springfallendeer In reply to planeta99 [2014-04-13 19:47:34 +0000 UTC]

XD
I love it when a conversation turns random~

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planeta99 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-13 19:56:35 +0000 UTC]

me too...
often the case with my friend, we are talking about and you or I say something stupid, then we restart to talk about something else

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Springfallendeer In reply to planeta99 [2014-04-13 19:59:06 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. With my friends it just turns into glomps and hugs until we just start sending faces to each-other, then we stop~

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planeta99 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-13 20:12:30 +0000 UTC]

good times...very good times
I remember that during a serious talk my friend tells me: "can I ​​ask you a question? but if Slender is bald has hair?" We burst out laughing like crazy, then we stopped...that was really beautifull

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Springfallendeer In reply to planeta99 [2014-04-13 20:33:38 +0000 UTC]

Of course it was~
But what would Slenderman look like with hair~?

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planeta99 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-14 13:08:10 +0000 UTC]

I do not know ... but I think it would risk the collapse caused by too much laughter
     

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Springfallendeer In reply to planeta99 [2014-04-14 13:53:11 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, he wouldn't be scary with hair~

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planeta99 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-14 15:00:22 +0000 UTC]

well, one of my characters is as sexualoffenderman, only that it is a female with long hair blacks, and the ability to summon a sword of shadow

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Springfallendeer In reply to planeta99 [2014-04-14 15:16:49 +0000 UTC]

Well, any female slender should probably have hair~

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planeta99 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-14 15:23:04 +0000 UTC]

you're probably right...   

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Springfallendeer In reply to planeta99 [2014-04-14 15:52:42 +0000 UTC]

That's how you know their female~

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planeta99 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-14 16:00:11 +0000 UTC]

yes, it's true

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Springfallendeer In reply to planeta99 [2014-04-14 16:01:50 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... Alright, lets go give Slenderman a gender change~

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planeta99 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-14 16:20:41 +0000 UTC]

let's gender change every one
Zalgo, Toby, Masky, LJ, Hoodie and Jeff

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Springfallendeer In reply to planeta99 [2014-04-14 16:25:52 +0000 UTC]

K. But first, lets give them female names...
ZALGO= ZALGA
Toby= Tiffany
Masky= Veilly (Veil-ly)
Hoodie= Amicey (Amice-y)
Laughing Jack= Laughing Janice
Jeff= Jackie

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planeta99 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-14 16:52:05 +0000 UTC]

i named Zalea a kind of gender of Zalgo
she is the great-grandmother's great-grandfather's of farash's father





for LJ x Jill...I know that you do not want to, but you could read my fanfic and tell me what you think?

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Springfallendeer In reply to planeta99 [2014-04-14 16:55:10 +0000 UTC]

Cool and I have no issues.
Like I said, I think Jill is either a clone or his sister- but everyone see's her differently so I don't care~

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planeta99 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-14 17:01:43 +0000 UTC]

thank you...
You know you're a professional and you know better than me how to structure a fanfic, then you can help

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Springfallendeer In reply to planeta99 [2014-04-14 17:03:42 +0000 UTC]

No problem. I read the first chapter and left a comment.

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planeta99 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-14 17:33:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Springfallendeer In reply to planeta99 [2014-04-14 17:34:39 +0000 UTC]

No problem~

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planeta99 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-14 17:36:33 +0000 UTC]

apart from the errors and dialogues, do you like the story in general?

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Springfallendeer In reply to planeta99 [2014-04-14 17:39:20 +0000 UTC]

Nice plot and such.

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planeta99 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-14 17:42:12 +0000 UTC]

thanks god
at least this is a good thing

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Springfallendeer In reply to planeta99 [2014-04-14 18:55:08 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, you just need to work on structure and grammar.

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planeta99 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-14 19:24:59 +0000 UTC]

I'm working now on Chapter 1, maybe load the prologue and the first chapter as soon as I finish...my problem is that the prologue has kept me steady for three weeks
if you are interested I can tell you about my story

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Springfallendeer In reply to planeta99 [2014-04-14 19:47:07 +0000 UTC]

Not right now- but maybe later.

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planeta99 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-14 20:22:48 +0000 UTC]

is most likely the story will proceed slowly

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Springfallendeer In reply to planeta99 [2014-04-14 20:38:23 +0000 UTC]

Slow and steady wins the race~

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planeta99 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-15 13:26:06 +0000 UTC]

are at the beginning of chapter one so it will take a while

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Springfallendeer In reply to planeta99 [2014-04-15 13:45:35 +0000 UTC]

K~

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slendycreeper In reply to ??? [2014-04-11 19:18:09 +0000 UTC]

This is both meaningful and truthful.

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Springfallendeer In reply to slendycreeper [2014-04-11 19:25:26 +0000 UTC]

I know. I've had the urge to write this poem for the past three days or so. I finally calmed down enough to do it.
I hope people who read this understand the importance of thinking before commenting.

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slendycreeper In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-11 19:28:32 +0000 UTC]

I hope they do too.

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