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Springfallendeer — Jack and Jill
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#horror #jack #jill #nursery #poem #rewrite #rhyme
Published: 2014-08-29 07:59:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 485; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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Jack and Jill,
had made their kill.
Deep in the blackness of night.
Blood and skin,
were seen within-
Their talons and claws alike.
Jack was strong-
his claws were long.
He used them to rip out eyes.
Jill was fast-
her skills surpassed.
The knowledge of priests so wise.
Both knew well,
the way to hell.
They worshiped the prince of sin.
They brought death-
they stole the breath.
Of all who stood before them.
Jack and Jill,
together kill.
Priests seek to end their madness
They shall die,
and say goodbye.
Plagued forever with sadness.
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Comments: 41
XD omg this is awsome XD
dosent really fit the real mening but, this is so darn catchy~ x3
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The, the real meaning is about killing a king and Europe or something falling into an economic depression or something, but, meh.
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I like how it goes to a tune like a nursery rhyme, but really...^^
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But really it's not exactly what down kids would want to hear at night. But here on DA its perfect ^^
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I see.
Well, its not exactly for little kids/depressed kids anyways, despite it being written by someone with clinical depression.
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Ah.
Still amazing.
Depression? Depression? D:
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Yeah, I've got a pretty bad depression going..
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Awwwww! D:
*More hugs*
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I looked up the original version, since I didn't know it before. I seriously prefer this version though! great job!
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I'm glad you like it ^^
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I'm pretty sure I'm gonna end up narrating all the twisted-fairytale poems you write considering how great they all are~
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Thanks~ And your welcome~!
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*Glomps and hides in your shoulder*
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*growls and holds you close*
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*Nuzzles your shoulder*
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I'm here Hun. It's ok.
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*Sighs* I know love. I just dont feel well.
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Just talk to me... Talking to you always perks me up.
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I hope so.. Just give me a few to get dressed and head for the store. Then I'll be on chatango. Promise.
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Alright love... But, I should probably try to eat something. I know my stomach isn't going to let up, and its better I eat before I've got on a 24 hour fast..
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