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This is the first page of the comic I’m doing. So I apologize that it is only sketched as actually coloring, Etc. Would take way too much time and I want to get these out often. To long story short, MCKenzie, Smith, Dale, and Mumford we’re flying a light mission over Rome with 50kilo. bombs to only hit a small target, but a storm approaches and the soon find themselves getting attacked by a German Unknown Wing, because they can’t see a thing nor see the wing properly. The wing riddles them with bullets and does manage to slightly wound Dale, but he carries on alright. Then the bomber is struck by lightening and starts over speeding for nearly 30 minutes, where everything was still dark. After the plane comes out of overspend, the plane emerges over dark clouds, and sees land, but is almost out of fuel and is forced to land the damaged bomber. After landing, Dale looks out the cracked glass of the bomber and sees a building that looks gloomy with the letters LC on it, and dawns on him that they are not in Rome anymore, but in a different place.

So if your having a hard time reading the script, here’s how it played out below:

(plane heavily damaged and flying in first panel in a brutal storm)

MCKenzie: WHERES THE LAND, I CANT SEE ANYTHING!!

(German Wing attacks the right side of the plane as Smith fires, but can see the plane)

Smith:HIS WING IS HARD TO HIT!!!!

(bullets hit the right nose of the bomber where Smith is nearly hit)

(Dale is hit by a stray bullet)

Dale: Aaggghhh!!!!

Mumford: HES COMING BACK AROUND!!!!

(Wing starts to fire and hit the left wing)

(a lightning bolt strikes the left side of the plane, frying the electric systems and messing up the controls)

(plane starts to heavily over speed)

MCKenzie: WERE GOING 500MPH!!!!

(next panel, the damaged plane stops over speeding eventually and flys out of the storm, but with no electric systems, damaged holes everywhere, and no fuel)

Mumford: there’s a city down there, we should land

(Dale looks at the empty fuel gauge)

Dale: we need to land...

(the damaged plane lands close to a large building in the forest)

(Dale looks at the building With the logo LC on its side)

Dale:Wait - where are we?

(Part 1 End)

Description
This is the first page of the comic I’m doing. So I apologize that it is only sketched as actually coloring, Etc. Would take way too much time and I want to get these out often. To long story short, MCKenzie, Smith, Dale, and Mumford we’re flying a light mission over Rome with 50kilo. bombs to only hit a small target, but a storm approaches and the soon find themselves getting attacked by a German Unknown Wing, because they can’t see a thing nor see the wing properly. The wing riddles them with bullets and does manage to slightly wound Dale, but he carries on alright. Then the bomber is struck by lightening and starts over speeding for nearly 30 minutes, where everything was still dark. After the plane comes out of overspend, the plane emerges over dark clouds, and sees land, but is almost out of fuel and is forced to land the damaged bomber. After landing, Dale looks out the cracked glass of the bomber and sees a building that looks gloomy with the letters LC on it, and dawns on him that they are not in Rome anymore, but in a different place.

So if your having a hard time reading the script, here’s how it played out below:

(plane heavily damaged and flying in first panel in a brutal storm)

MCKenzie: WHERES THE LAND, I CANT SEE ANYTHING!!

(German Wing attacks the right side of the plane as Smith fires, but can see the plane)

Smith:HIS WING IS HARD TO HIT!!!!

(bullets hit the right nose of the bomber where Smith is nearly hit)

(Dale is hit by a stray bullet)

Dale: Aaggghhh!!!!

Mumford: HES COMING BACK AROUND!!!!

(Wing starts to fire and hit the left wing)

(a lightning bolt strikes the left side of the plane, frying the electric systems and messing up the controls)

(plane starts to heavily over speed)

MCKenzie: WERE GOING 500MPH!!!!

(next panel, the damaged plane stops over speeding eventually and flys out of the storm, but with no electric systems, damaged holes everywhere, and no fuel)

Mumford: there’s a city down there, we should land

(Dale looks at the empty fuel gauge)

Dale: we need to land...

(the damaged plane lands close to a large building in the forest)

(Dale looks at the building With the logo LC on its side)

Dale:Wait - where are we?

(Part 1 End)