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Published: 2005-11-10 13:57:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 246; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 129
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Sorry'bout all the lines but it's the only way i could get deviantart to respect my layout, feedback appreciated.-----------------------Having lost----The only person
---------Everything and nothing----I ever truely loved
----------------To my own fears
-----------------As a single cloud----Again i find myself
----------------------Drifting away---wandering cluelessly
-------------------I can only envy----trying so hard to flee
Tied down by my own emotions----the grey sky
----------------------------------------Of my own imagination
---------------------Feeling frozen----I wish i could love again
------------------start warming up----free my mind
--------------------To go further...
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Comments: 4
DanielVG [2006-03-24 14:17:44 +0000 UTC]
hey, i once wrote a little verse too:
If life was a person
I would take his hand
and lead him to an open stop in the sun
everything would be ok life, don't worry
keep you hands next to you body.
And then i'd kick him in the nuts and start running & laughing.
I just pwnd life.
I hope you will pwn life too someday.
end of verse.
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Ethelind [2005-11-10 16:19:53 +0000 UTC]
oh wow.
very interesting structure
I like it
and I proclaim now: you will love again.
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Sqwob In reply to Ethelind [2005-11-14 17:55:04 +0000 UTC]
Things will change and are changing all the time... i learned some very important lessons here.. I let my emotions make many decisions that my mind should have made. And now i'm paying the price for this.
Sadness never comes alone though, there's always a brighter side to things... i turned over my entirely life to be where I am now, and now it's up to me to make the best out of things (i quit my job impulsivly just 6 months go, moved to a different city, found a new job, was homeless for monts, found a new place to live, lost the love of my life ...) all this brought me to the next part of my life... i'm happy i reached it by the age of 25 and with not to much drama.
The world is actually smiling at me, and i won't let shit get me down
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