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StanxKyleFan — A Messy Shape
Published: 2010-07-03 02:51:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 272; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 2
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I'm inside this triangle hereA triangle that has not a shape
The triangle filled with pain and greed
The pain I've bent, now to escape
I know I could've let this go
But back then i felt in love with you
Was your love divided in two?
Was it love for me? That cant be true.
How can you sit and watch us by?
Fighting till numb in your triangle
In your game that drives us crazy
But still a game that makes you happy
An emotional triangle
A very messy shape
It goes like a circle
I find it hard to escape
I should have known, this couldn't last
My feelings never stay the same.
I need to learn, so maybe now
I'll buckle down and end this game.
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Comments: 20
AAHHH!!!! its a HEXAGON!!!
wait did i just leave a comment that was a complete waste of time?
yes yes i did
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OMG thats an awesome poem! ^^ love triangles suck! :c ive been in one before and hated it!
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im in one now 
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It's not a fail by any means (:
On a technical level, I enjoy the predominantly ABCB rhyme scheme - on a deeper and more intimate level, I love that you simplified the complexities of a love triangle and fit it neatly into five quatrains. I can really relate to this poem.
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Yeah. I like it. It has feeling.
I occasionally write poetry, but the last poem I submitted was the result of PCP-laced marijuana, and I apologise for how up-front that statement is, but it shows how little I actually apply myself when it comes to poetry.
It impresses me that someone can write poetry about their feelings and make it less than mediocre, any more.
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yeah i understand, and on need to appologize XD
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pssssh, this isn't fail
I love all your poems <33
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I really do love them 
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feeling is one of the biggest inspirations
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it is! for serious
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