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STARLIRIOUS — Well, Watcha Waiting For?
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Published: 2017-03-13 22:16:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 327; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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On my other paintings, I had red and blue so I figured to add gold to the mix ;w; I have so many other things I have to do like work or owed art or papers, but nahRelated content
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This is my first critique, but here I go. This is my personal opinion on this drawing.
The pose is really nice honestly, it really matches what you were going for. The anatomy is somewhat odd, for example, the hand looks somewhat swelled to me, and the horns are a bit uneven.
The shading is very nice. It fits the background very well and sets atmosphere. The shading is a bit overwhelming on certain parts of the picture, to where theres more lighting then shading. The patch-like shading is nice.
Some flaws are probably the eyes, which stand out compared to the tone of the picture, a very clear black instead of toned down like the rest of the body. The arms are a little wavy, but I understand if you were going for a cartooney style.
This piece us very easy on the eyes, I hope this critique is okay ;w;
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Yo! Thank you so much for critiquing my work! (I changed the file too) I fixed the eyes to a much duller shade and size, the hand was being a pain so I left it, but the horns aren't meant to be even. is head is actually tilted where he's about to turn his head to you left, but the shading I added doesn't show since his colors are too much of a dark faded black
But thanks for the other stuff too! I think anatomy is something I need to greatly improve especially in non canine drawings
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Im really glad you took my criticism into thought! and my second thought was the head being tilted, sorry that i didnt realize. I understand that you cant shade it, i was meaning more like a dark tone on a part of the picture, but its completely up to you! this is probably way better then i could draw bendy though pff
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No problem! And now I kinda want to make the rest darker ;w; (I'll probably change it in the morning, but again, thanks!)
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thaaaaaaaannnkss
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*steals you away* YOU ARE MINE NOW
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Bring me to your memeader
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But you are my Memeader ;v;
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