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step-into-darkness — C.L.H. Chapter 2, page 10
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An original story.Title: Castle in the Light of Hyiero.
Chapter 2: "The Final Battle"
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Not too bad... i kinda like how the lay out came out...
Page summary:
Mosi Odion (left) and Receio (right) stare each other down and square off to battle....
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Best page so far!!! (according to me of course! 
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yeah sure, apply ALL you want...when i sketched it out i wasnt sure if i liked it, but after i darkened in the lines i realized it was pretty good...thank you
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Jeeez the fighting is like, forever or something...im more than halfway finished though..these guys are gonna start fighting, then some shits gonna happen, then some other shit is gonna happen, then the chapters over...i SO didnt say anything just now....
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bohahahahaaa >:3
*twitching ear*
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thanks, i think this page came out pretty cool too...the layout is solid... thanks a lot for commenting
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the pages are fantastic!!
the colors and effects are very good and the story manages to hold the attention of the reader
the final battle promises to be exciting.
as I said before his art has evolved as well as its history and is a surprising level of technique and style
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you're the best Billy...thanks for the critique, i so appreciate it...ill probably have a couple more lines to translate over the next week or two...its a coincidence that you speak portuguese and my character is Brazillian... now i need to know someone that speaks arabic for the other character haha, thats not going to be easy...
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Arabic?
really hard, I have a Turkish and an Iranian friend but I do not remember seeing Arabs still.
if you need help(portuguese) just tell me ok?
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