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Swing-ee — Shell
Published: 2005-09-15 09:41:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 72; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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Description A devious smile,
A subtle glance,
A glimpse of fangs for thee.

An eyebrow raised,
An answer sought,
A flash of metal to see.

A blood stained dress,
A boiling tear,
A breath too fast and shallow.

Her flesh denied,
Has taken flight,
Gone where I cannot follow.

A life has left,
my love has gone,
To where I have not been.

An empty shell,
I rock to sleep,
To dream a better dream
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Comments: 7

CreativeConceptions [2007-03-05 22:55:16 +0000 UTC]

wow, I love this one! check out the other poems similar to this one here -> ~Lost-in-Reality but this is cool!

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Warry [2006-03-07 10:00:16 +0000 UTC]

Nice poem, is there a reason for it?

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Swing-ee In reply to Warry [2006-03-07 10:06:26 +0000 UTC]

yes. the point was to write a really good poem that flowed off the tongue really easily

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Warry In reply to Swing-ee [2006-03-07 10:07:16 +0000 UTC]

but no other inspiration?

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Swing-ee In reply to Warry [2006-03-07 23:38:13 +0000 UTC]

yes. vampire love. hmmm....hiding the darkness inside.

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Warry In reply to Swing-ee [2006-03-08 18:55:34 +0000 UTC]

Now that makes the poem make more sense, and with that comes better understanding and enjoyment of the art.

Very Nice, I love it, espceially how the 'poet' is pining for the loss that he has caused, (a bit ironic dont you think)

Loves Ya

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Swing-ee In reply to Warry [2006-03-08 22:28:59 +0000 UTC]

indeedy doody

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