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Published: 2018-01-10 06:41:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 436; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 0
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God this game is old by now but I love it! this is sugar the hidden boss of OFF in zone 0. I just love her design.Related content
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Since this is the first time I have ever critiqued black and white line art (at least on here), Iβll try and give this one my efforts. Shading can make or break art, especially if itβs in black and white, and you have done quite well on your characterβs billowing clothes effect and her dangling fake spiders add to her persona nicely. You have also marked her fingers and toes rather well, an uncommon trait in line and traditional art. However, her fake spiders have their shadings overemphasised and her under shadow shadows over her right foot too heavily as does her hair's shadow over her neck. Her baggy shirt and trousers once again give off the nice effect of the shadowing, but her lack of shines render the work somewhat flat in its hues. Also, while her fingernails are pretty well detailed, her toenails are absent from her otherwise well-defined toes. What I would suggest in the future is to make your shading and detail a little more consistent. Beyond this, you're off to a great start.
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thank you ,but one they are candies not spiders, two i do all shading on one layer, three cause it's black and white i couldn't do lighting since it wouldn't show, and four i'll make a note on the toe thing i normally draw characters with shoes.
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WOW! This maybe be a black and white line art, but because of the shading, this artwork was lifted up! I loved the proportion of the character here! It really looks perfect! Good job on the character's clothing too! It looks beautiful and awesome! The accessories on the hair and on her hand looks great too! The small flowers and ribbons looks cute. Again, the shading looks awesome here! All in all you did a wonderful job on this piece! I hope this made your day and thank you for making me do this critique for you! Always stay awesome!
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Oh thank you so much! and btw those are candies lol
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You're welcome and oh sorry ><
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Sucre!
I love seeing off art, and this is such a good character, you did such amazing work with her ;w;
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thank you! I was watching mark's old playthough and i was sad that i didn't find the game sooner like why undertale why you make me miss this beautiful game!
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thank you!
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