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TakayoTemujin — Rolling back time Part 3
Published: 2009-08-08 12:45:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 2384; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Finally done, before national day and not to soon! Appreciate any comments! Thanks you so much again for favoriting my artwork! I hope this page doesn't disappoint any of you guys! Predators and aliens are still a property of Darkhorse, but certain made up characters and names within are still made up origin by me only! I have added sound effects in it... not to sure if its ok, please give some comments ya? Thanks again guys...Next Page- [link]
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WOW!!!! OMG You're really good with detail!!!! I like how it begins. ^.^ I love how it shows the first persson point of view!! Amazing!!
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Ok then but still
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This teaches you that you can fight your masters, but don't F*CK around with them! I say that you should keep with the Sound effects, just to give it that sweet taste of comics from the present.
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Hmmm... ok tks for the comment!
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Hmm... the first scene is kind of confusing, I actually thought dechande was the one being attacked there but the blade was pointing the wrong way. You should add some kind of blur with his arm holding the sword so it doesn't seem so off.
As for the sound effects, not bad, however, if you have only one sound effect like the one where the sword gets knocked out of dechande's hand, play with the word a little, add effects to it. It adds to it's intensity when done correctly.
Liking this so far, wonder where this will be going.
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He was attack! But in a sparring mode, hmmm... i actually used very japanese way of swinging the blade(as in the blur part). Seems its like not so clearly displayed, Hmmm... as for the sound effect, i think im still learnin hahaha, thanks for the comment.
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do u find it hard to read?
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the one part when dread eye was telling him that its life or death in a fight with a hardmeat
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ah... i have enlarge the pic, is it better?
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