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Published: 2018-05-15 03:13:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 197; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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This took me forever, mainly because I messed up on the face and lost the motivation to finish the remainder of the drawing. But it's done. And here it is, Heavenly-Heaven . After weeks and weeks. The contest entry.Please tell me you haven't finished judging already...
Anyways, hope you enjoy! Please critique it. Please. I need feedback, due to my self-confidence not being low enough as an edgy teen.
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Oh my gosh this is great! Don't worry, I'm not done judging yet. I'm still expecting a few more entries. Keep up the amazing work!
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Beautiful ;v;
Tell me you're ways of backgrounds on paper and how you color so beautiful. (and that shading tho, wonderful!)
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Ahhh, really? Thank you so much! I didn't think I was in any position to give art advice, but... I guess just go slowly and press fairly hard? Also clean lines??
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Not that you weren't doing that already, I suppose? I dunno. What am I doing.
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I love the shape of the scarf! And the colors are surprisingly intense for traditional, good job! Nice attention to lighting as well.
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Yay! Thank you!
I don't mean to bother you, but... is there anything bad about it? Or, like, things I could improve on? I want to get all the feedback possible!
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I think if I were to improve on something, it would be the hair texture. The lighting on it is fine, but it makes the hair look like one piece. Then again, it is straight hair, so that could be considered stylistic.Β
The only other thing I can find is the neck size, but that is just a matter of proportion practice. Her shoulders are too far from her jawline, which is probably a result of drawing the coiled scarf. (I've done that literally hundreds of times, that's the only reason I noticed XP)
But seriously, this is great. You've been improving rapidly, I can tell you will go far!Β
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Thank you!! I'll try to work on that in my next piece!
lol iΒ actually sketched it out first, but then i realized the neck was way too long so i tried to hide it with the scarf. goddamn you, scarf, for being so bad at hiding mistakes.
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