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PortugueseLion [2017-01-13 22:33:12 +0000 UTC]

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I like your work a lot, in all its simplicity, so I will try to respond more often to your request of a critique. In this one you picture a classical theme of a obvious dominant guy who has fun with an helpless one. The way you pick it up is original for a chewed up theme. No leather involved but a normal (bed)room as far as I can see looking at the hinges of the door. They wear regular clothes, there is a modest amount of bare skin. This could very well be their first kinky play. The top seems to have a genuine interest in how his partner will react when he squeezes his nipple through the fabric of the shirt. Not the most spectacular action, but he looks as if the guy could faint. Also the expression of this tied guy is befitting and natural. The photographer seems just an observer, not a director of experienced models. It can be that you wanted it to have a bit of an amateur-look. Otherwise a second light source at the right would have helped a lot to eliminate the shadows. The darker shirt it cut at a somewhat awkward place. A little bit of extra space would have helped and the undesirable doorknob that is shown then, can be photoshopped as far as I am concerned but there can be different opinions about that. Both faces(the most important) are well light however. As a whole it keeps the attention of the viewer.

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picture-da-picture [2017-02-15 07:10:53 +0000 UTC]

Tie me up....PLeASe!!! ❤️🙋🏼‍♂️

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