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This is a beautiful model and location. I like the pose and the gaze of the model. The wheat stalks on the same focal plane as the model help to create a sense of depth across the width of the photo. Overall, this is a very nice photo. There are two white blobs (presumably houses) just to the right of the model that keep drawing my eye and focus away from her, though. As another critique already mentioned, the elbow being cut off at the bottom of the frame looks a little awkward. Excellent focus and depth of field, though. I really like this photo!
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Thanks a lot!
I really appreciate your critique.
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Great natural light!
I like your composition, but I would choose not to cut her elbow.
The DOF works perfectly.
I think it would benefit from just a little desaturation. I think that would give more structure to the red flowers, but that's just how I like it.
Just a little unsure if the straw in the foreground is disturbing or if it brings more depht to the photo. I like it and i dont.
Would be easier to decide if her elbow was complete (i think).
Nice contact with the naturally beautiful model.
Over all a good photo.
Keep it up!
Espen
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I really appreciate your critique! 
Have a nice day!
Timeea-Rebeca
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First critique, here we go!
I believe this has been executed beautifully. The flower crown really suggests a connection to nature which is emphasised by the subject's location. The choice of the subject's shirt is an excellent on for this image and helps in creating a sense of unity. I also love the inclusion of the flower crown - it's been done before - but it really helps add interest to and complete this piece. One thing I would suggest (though this is purely my own opinion), would be to make the pose a little more natural e.g. bringing one arm down from her head, perhaps (so she maybe looks a little more comfortable, and therefore more natural). Just my two cents.
Overall, a lovely piece ^ ^
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Hello
Thank you for your critique. I was expecting to get as many as possible.
First of all I'd say that I'd take into consideration you suggestion about how the model should pose to have a more natural and comfortable capture.
Thank you for your feedback and have a nice day!
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Hello!
Your artwork was featured in this journal: mrs-durden.deviantart.com/jour…
Please check it out and 
Thank you
Nina
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Thank you a looot!
it means a lot for me!
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thank youu! 
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