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Okay here is Azuza Entni a nelvaanian born on the planet coruscant some time after order 66. She was raised in a family of 6 her mother and father two younger brothers and younger sister.But as time passed Both sister, mother and brothers were inflected with an extremely deadly illness that threatens there lives and the cure is worth billions of republic credits per person,
Despite her father owning a restaurant they were no billionaires so Azuza saw the best way to help her father save her family was to join the imperial military.
Apoun her boot camp training she met so many great people in the empire and was eventually deployed on the First deathstar but before she got there it was destroyed many of those good people she knew died that day.
This would be the start of her hatered for the rebellion
And would develop a grudge against them including planets that they are affiliated with especially after the battle of hoth.
To her the rebellion was full of crazy terrorists that belive in some old crazy Jedi religion that tryed to take over the galaxy in the past and needs to be destroyed.
After destroying the rebels on hoth she was prmoted to scout trooper and serves as an Imperial enforcer
And is one of the minority of troops to survive the battle of endor.
When the second deathstar was destroyed Azuza and some survivors if you count the sniper auto turret droid and an injured emprial piolt and couple troopers.
Stolen back an empiral landingcraft shuttle and escaped Endor and were lucky enof
to come across a near by emprial Star destroyer
For her heroism for the rescue of three injured troopers and pilot along with critical Intel agenst the rebellion she was then promoted again to an emprial elite storm commando.
Although with that being said she still prefered her regular armour over the elite armour on top of it being equipped with a blanket made of Ewok fur.
She also never got a new scope for her rifle earnging her the name The broken scope.
Azuza Entni by me
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This has given some inspiration for an OC I’m creating. (coincidentally also Nelvaanian)
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I wonder how the tale of Azuza Entni would continue during the era of the First Order.
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This is amazing. Keep it up.
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Although the Empire and First Order are similar Azuza doesn't care for the first order
Nor the resistance.
In that era she go's her own way and focuses more on destroying the conflict between the jedi and sith.
Since most of the wars are caused by both ideologies conflicts.
As a mercenarie
even if it means going against both Resistance and First order.
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I found this video that may help on why Azuza dislikes the Rebels and supports the empire! www.youtube.com/watch?v=s4Y3dl…
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Yes this is exactly what im using to fuel her hatered against the rebels. The deathstar explosions would cause a devistating recession.
Making it impossible for her and her father to afford the necessary treatment for her younger siblings and mothers deadly illness, On top of already lossing all her friends on both deathstars the anger would eventually turn her into....
The broken scope.
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Sorry that I keep bombarding you with these comments that would probably annoy you nut here is my last suggestion for this post, although I may regret saying that.
What if she also wears a Kama that the clone troopers wore clonetrooper.wikia.com/wiki/Ka…
It would serve several purposes: additional protection on her lower half, pockets to carry additional ammo and other useful items, able to hide her non human appearances further like her tail (the empire still has adopted a xenophobic policy for their military after all), and finally and probably most importantly to her, stops her comrade from constantly being distracted by her "inpressive, most impressive" lower half.
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Wow i just started yesterday working on a sketch of her with an old clone scout trooper kama version from battle front 2.
You can read me like a book.
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The by golly call me the NSA!
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Ohhh I wonder if Emperor Obama noticed me!lolol
But seriously how does this sound?
The return of Moff Seerdon from rouge squadron 64
I figured if the Emperor is dead the remaining Empire needs a new strong leader.
All he need is a badass design like scars and burns and maybe a pair of mechanical arms and legs from his air fight with Luke Skywalker and maybe a cigar and sunglasses.
He'll be good as new.
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Oh and one piece of advice regarding story plans for her; try not to have her be a part of any canon events or interact with prominent characters in any major way if at all. I'm saying this because as a star wars fan who has experienced any side stories, nothing takes me out of the immersion more than seeing an oc character be part of say the yavin and he played a major part in the outcome of the battle or that he was best friends with Lando or Admiral Akbar. I want to see Azuza have her own stories separate from the events in the movies or other Canon star wars and expanded universe material. I believe that this will lead to stronger storytelling as well as deeper immersion since it makes me feel that the whole galaxy doesn't revolve around only a handful of characters and the events that they were a part of.
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Yeah i know what ya sayen this is totally her own perspective and fate.
The cannon characters might get a few mention s but thats about it trust me the only.
Battle shes in thats in the movies is endor but her involvement there was on the other side of the planet and Morley to do with rescuing any surviving other troops left of her squad.
Due to the overwhelming ewok problem writing her through it is gonna Be awesome.
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Many people underappreciate the power of the ewoks. Small as they may be, they have the strength of chimpanzees and they are known to hunt and kill gigantic creatures for food, which was why they live high in the trees. Also, you may have seen them attemting to cook hand and chewy in Return of the Jedi, now imagine that the real reason why they were celebrating the fall of the empire despite not even knowing what lies beyond their planet is that they had a successful hunt and have accumulated so much meat following the land battle of Endor via dead stormtroopers.
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(When I get to that part of her story.)
If shes not careful she'll end up like every other trooper.
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No one could top over what vader had to go through;
www.youtube.com/watch?v=FVzc20…
Seriously, do whatever you want. According to the new official canon now, Palpatine has given an order posthumously to scour multiple rebel worlds including naboo. To me, the following chaos would over a perioid of time gradually change Azuza's perception of the empire from a force of stability to a rotting corpse of it's former self and may eventually abandon the what remains of the empire (perhaps after the battle of Jakku since that was the last hope of the empire ever coming back on top) and she becomes a mercenary (different from a bounty hunter) for several factions to sell her skills as a scout/assassin in order to make the money she so desperately needs.
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Thats ture vader did suffer quite a lot,
Im not gonna spoil everything so im gonna hurry up and Finnish the cover her comic.
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Will it be reddy by tomorrow you think? No need to rush since as Miyamoto says, "A delayed game can only get better until release, a rushed game is bad forever" or something like that
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It doesn't appear so. One of my pens broke and destroyed the first so im starting again.
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Have you considered buying a drawing tablet? Some artists do prefer drawing on paper than on a computer and drawing on a tablet has its own drawbacks (pun intended) so either way, I still like how your drawings look.
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I wish I did but I don't even have a computer to use one on yet alone a scanner.
believe it or not but everything i do is on a cellphone.
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Really! I would have never guessed! You must have a very steady hand and good lighting.
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I liked the back story you have her but there is just one issue that I found. The empire has discriminating policy against non humans which prevent them from serving in the military. Only few exceptions like Admiral Thrawn who show impressive skills and pocess much potential could be allowed to enlist with the emperor's personal approval.
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Damn I knew there had to have been some details I've forgotten about the Empire,
Not to worry I can probably come up with something like her having a ridiculous amount of agility and the perception of a sith or jedi.
Despite not being one
witch could help explain her legendary marksmanship with broken scoped/unscoped blasters.
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Thank you for replying so quickly! I was going to add one more thing about her back story but I thought that would have been too anal on my part as well as unnecessary (Two kinds of scouts in star wars: the Star wars battlefront kind and those who map out the galaxy to try to find quicker hyperspace routes).
Also an explanation you could use for her superior marksmanship, although cliche, is that she is unknowingly force sensitive. Some imperial officers may find out about this as well as the emperor but they see no reason to interject due to her posing no threat to the emperor himself, her usefulness to the military, and that she has no interest in learning the ways force at all.
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I guess that was my idea a typical recuit grunt with no real skills, She also has a problem staying foucused and on task (always makes notes)
The only reason she got in was really her near super human extremely unusual physical abilities and heighten senses.
To the untrained eye she appears as a super athlete with no limit to her stamina but to the trained you don't have to be a jedi to see she has a huge unrealistic conection to the force.
But due to her extreme loyalty and dedication in destroying the rebel terrorists and complete lack of care for the power of the force on top of that zero intention to be harm to the emperor she earned a pardon for it.
Infact when it was found out she became one of the many to hunt down remaining jedi she thinks she has a nack for tracking jedi and maybe one day. She hopes to find rebel terrorists Luke Skywalker and be given orders to shoot on sight. (She has no idea tha she's using the force)
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So she is not so much an anti hero but more of a lawful neutral individual where although she knowsaid somewhat of the worst thing the empire did, she still sees it as the best hope for galactic peace and knows that if the rebels win the galaxy will turn to chaos and be in perpetual civil ear. Sort of like the force awakens.
Also will there be a new drawing of her in the near future?
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Hell yeah Azuza will be seen more frequently
And Yes shes more a lawbringer she believes peace is only achievable within law and order and if you do not comply we will enforce. A few lives destroyed is worth peace for the entire galaxy and if pushed the entire planet.
After the battle of endor i was thinking of a new story
Splitting the faction of
the Empire from the First order. Only because from what I seen in the movies they seem a little different for some reason i just can't put my finger on it.
Rather then there being
Just one army against another I want to make a story of two Half-brother armys and the resistance against each other.
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I see Azuza more likely going freelancing as a bounty hunter or something like that than joining the first order after the fall of the empire. She may see them as not the true empire but rather just a second group of rebels that will try to restore the old empire but are doing it in ways she doesn't approve.
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Man your gonna love it when i draw it.
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It's sad when you're the viewer and you see both sides, yet neither of those sides sees the other's point-of-view.
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Yep Evil is all perspective ones villain can easily be anothers hero.
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They're better in her zero suit.
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Thanks i upgraded it alittle
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As much as I like your sexy stuff, this is actually pretty nice change of pace. I hope we see more of it.
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Oh trust me no one is immune ill get to her zero suit soon enough, Oh i also edited it alittle
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