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wordofthewillow [2013-01-13 02:35:00 +0000 UTC]

I like it..as katie put..interesting. It's a bit hard to read, but looking it over a second time I was able to pick out the stops and starts of new thoughts.

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Toastybob In reply to wordofthewillow [2013-01-13 05:03:43 +0000 UTC]

Next time I plan to decrease the width of the source page, since, as it is in the public domain, I can shape the original text however I want. I'll also look into increasing the line spacing, but I'm not quite sure how to accomplish that in Calibre. The way your poems are connected by lines seems to greatly enhance clarity, too, so I might just have to steal that. It would also be nice not to have to conform to the order of the original text.

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wordofthewillow In reply to Toastybob [2013-01-13 08:14:38 +0000 UTC]

Exactly! There were quite a few words in your poem, so connection might help you there. I liked it though, so definitely keep going. I know I will, it's really fun!

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theartisticnerd [2013-01-12 22:38:43 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting. That whole blotting out selected words thing is quite new to me... neat!

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Toastybob In reply to theartisticnerd [2013-01-13 04:57:13 +0000 UTC]

I also thought it was interesting--I couldn't wait to try it! It seems to have a few names, but one of hte most popular is "erasure."

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theartisticnerd In reply to Toastybob [2013-01-13 07:34:41 +0000 UTC]

Haha! That's cool. Didn't know that!

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