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Toxic-Mario — First in Line

Published: 2012-02-05 19:13:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 86209; Favourites: 1008; Downloads: 934
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Description Ok....I'll say this now.....people have been demanding I get the eyes finally in the MLP style. I got sooooo pissed off at some of you saying I couldn't do them. Well....anytime I get that....time to prove people wrong. Pinkie in the second to last panel....IDK why her eyes are off but oh well.


Anywho I finally got this out. This would have been out last week but I got soooo tied up in the collab comic with Tsitra360 that took 4 days. Forgive me if I withhold my apology cause that collab was awesome. But time to get back to my stuff.


Overall I'm pleased with the way this turned out. I took my time with this....I HATE doing sweet apple acres....all the trees...it's worse than Twilight's library.....ok maybe not. I find it amazing I do better at building settings now than outdoor setting. Anyway what you guys think of this comic? Like it? Comments and the occasion critique is helpful. I read them all remember.


Time spent: 20 hours over 4 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5


PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking us. Remember to link this back to us if you put this on a site or something.


Rainbow Dash, Pinkie © Lauren Faust
Art © Me
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Comments: 303

RivuRedevour [2012-02-06 08:31:41 +0000 UTC]

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This was actually pretty amazing. I love how you put a lot of emphasis on the eyes and body movements to convey each character's emotions. The eyes really took the cake here. I could actually see this in the show because the characters were actually believable with their dialogue representing their personalities. Nice work with the change of backgrounds though, which kept the comic from being too repetitive / dull. The background changes actually made the comic more dynamic. I particularly liked the way dash's tail hung over the panel. That really got my attention and added a cool effect too. Overall, good job.

It would've been funny if we could see Pinkie Pie out of the comic by the 4th Panel to the right when she says "Hey Rainbow". I think that would add a lot of humor because we all know PP loves breaking the fourth wall, even in comics!

P.S. I would recommend using "Dashie" instead of "Dashy" because it appeals to more people since it has been used in many fanfics and subtitles in the show. That's my opinion though.

P.S.S I'm 14 by the way

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Toxic-Mario In reply to RivuRedevour [2012-02-06 10:46:28 +0000 UTC]

Appreciate it on the spelling...I've seen it spelled 2 ways....I'll make sure I know that in the future.

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Kewpa [2012-02-06 06:35:00 +0000 UTC]

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The eyes look perfect to me. The expressions and poses are very well done, I particularly Dash's expression in panel 2, and Pinkie's in panel 5. Clearly true to the show in that fashion; emotive and cute.

The use of multiple backgrounds was a nice touch, it kept the comic from appearing too static.

One minor gripe I have with this is that Dash's tail is partially out of panel when she's sitting down, though perhaps it's a stylistic thing?

That aside, I like the writing, it's authentic to the show, not much to say there. I found it very funny and charming.

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Toxic-Mario In reply to Kewpa [2012-02-06 07:05:04 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I did that on purpose....chopping the tail off like that would have looked stupid....it was something people on my LS wanted to see me do.

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Pineappa [2012-02-06 00:24:56 +0000 UTC]

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LOL XD

The only Prob. Is that I cant see wut she's saying (Rainy)

The words are too small for me but the other things are EPIC.

Keep Up The Good Work.

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FNAF2006 [2016-03-06 23:22:08 +0000 UTC]

Poor rainbow...
       

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Robotponytron [2016-01-22 20:38:07 +0000 UTC]

NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO goes backwards OOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNN

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FeelTheShame [2015-11-28 04:05:23 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Painter85 [2015-03-30 07:04:39 +0000 UTC]

me: oh poor RD hmmm...
2 hours later
me: here RD made it myself by watching a video.

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ForestStarStudios [2015-03-18 00:01:12 +0000 UTC]

Dashie's tail breaks the 4th wall twice. DON'T LET HER GET LIKE PINKIE!!! WAAAAH!!

lol awsome comic

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arcader1 [2014-05-15 02:02:21 +0000 UTC]

*taps rainbowdashes shoulder* exuse me

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MLPegasis4898 [2014-02-17 04:20:57 +0000 UTC]

Aw! Poor Dashie...

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AlexandBelle1993 [2013-11-28 19:35:06 +0000 UTC]

If Dash stays there for a year then she will be the first in line

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Linkzilla [2013-10-12 05:02:59 +0000 UTC]

Huh - Rainbow Dash is an Alcoholic?

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HereticalRosePetal In reply to Linkzilla [2013-11-18 19:22:26 +0000 UTC]

She never got the cider. She wanted to get a mug for once.

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AlexKazhdan [2013-09-07 16:34:34 +0000 UTC]

In panel 5, I was expecting Pinkie to pull on Rainbow's tail from panel 4.

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scootaloo4805 [2013-09-07 02:15:43 +0000 UTC]

pobre   dash 

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GoldenPonyZ [2013-09-04 02:04:03 +0000 UTC]

Is this some kind of crueeeeelll joke?!

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Pandora-Dementia [2013-07-19 02:47:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh how well you portrayed one of my favorite Dashie moments! Cute!

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The-Necromancer [2013-06-18 10:27:00 +0000 UTC]

The-Necromancer believes this is what we call a "Charlie Brown" moment.

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SkalopultonDraw20 [2013-04-15 05:05:24 +0000 UTC]

I hate seeing Dashie suffer.

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xormak In reply to SkalopultonDraw20 [2013-08-05 06:47:55 +0000 UTC]

me too. In the first season i wouldn't have cared just a little bit but now after her great character development...I just started to love heer *_*

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addy1235 In reply to SkalopultonDraw20 [2013-05-10 11:53:18 +0000 UTC]

Ditto.

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Coolrose60 In reply to addy1235 [2014-02-04 22:22:57 +0000 UTC]

Me toooooooooooooooo

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crystal665 [2013-04-03 13:24:12 +0000 UTC]

poor dashie

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cinidoodle [2013-03-05 22:04:58 +0000 UTC]

aww poor dashie!

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SillyOlBear1989 [2013-03-01 03:23:53 +0000 UTC]

Pffft, poor Dashie!

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zappo210 [2012-12-16 21:31:27 +0000 UTC]

wamp wamp wa-wa-wa-wa-wa...

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SecretLaser [2012-12-03 09:43:46 +0000 UTC]

*cry XD*

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PowerSourceArts [2012-10-09 00:56:52 +0000 UTC]

Here have some cider*gives it to her*

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uay778 [2012-10-06 16:40:22 +0000 UTC]

sweeties belles party?

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MeganekkoPlymouth241 [2012-10-02 01:39:55 +0000 UTC]

"Oh I know the answer to that one, too! Whatcha! WHO SAID LIFE WAS FAIR?"

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TheBadFaerie [2012-09-08 13:25:40 +0000 UTC]

Is Rainbow Dash old enough to drink?

I guess that Ponyville doesn't have an Over 21's rule.

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AlexKazhdan In reply to TheBadFaerie [2013-09-07 16:30:20 +0000 UTC]

Ponyville cider is non-alcoholic.

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Toxic-Mario In reply to TheBadFaerie [2012-09-08 17:14:23 +0000 UTC]

yes

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SavageTheronGuard [2012-08-09 04:17:18 +0000 UTC]

its just not fair I HAD TIME

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YesImDeadpool [2012-07-30 02:23:18 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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Centaur71 [2012-07-25 04:24:23 +0000 UTC]

Alas; the first in line, but the last to know...

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trygveblacktiger [2012-07-24 20:20:35 +0000 UTC]

i understand she. Like it was a morning at scool and it was allways emty with ice now it was my turn on scool and one day i got there firsht but yea no ice cream to me

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Toxic-Mario In reply to trygveblacktiger [2012-07-24 21:35:27 +0000 UTC]

yeah

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bunniesrule6 [2012-07-07 17:36:08 +0000 UTC]

poor dashie

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DolphinBuster [2012-06-24 16:57:19 +0000 UTC]

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

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Austria-Man [2012-06-23 13:37:02 +0000 UTC]

Poor Rainbow Dash. The right place, but the wrong time. And what kind of party means Pinkie Pie?

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The-Only-Nyx-Sparkle [2012-06-15 15:04:02 +0000 UTC]

Trollie Pie pretty much?

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madman12000 [2012-05-13 20:29:36 +0000 UTC]

Forever ciderless...

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squishgirl [2012-04-14 05:56:22 +0000 UTC]

Poor rainbow dash

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Toxic-Mario In reply to squishgirl [2012-04-14 09:08:01 +0000 UTC]

XD

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squishgirl In reply to Toxic-Mario [2012-04-14 14:28:27 +0000 UTC]

Will you make mlp fim: raionbow dash comic movie or show something anything rainbow dash you want

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mechatrain150 [2012-04-03 22:04:12 +0000 UTC]

dont feel bad you where there when it ended dashie. :3

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Toxic-Mario In reply to mechatrain150 [2012-04-03 22:30:14 +0000 UTC]

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